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Model

Sakura Star

Posts: 42

London, England, United Kingdom

Hi world of MM!

I've been modelling since January this year and the two images below are from a D/s style shoot.  When I received the final images I was very proud of what I've done/achieved/how I look but these two specific shots surprised and shocked me although I love them both.  I've refused open leg shots but felt it was right for the stories each image portrays.

I'd appreciate critique, feedback and points to improve.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32153310 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31876078 18+

Kind regards
Sakura x

Mar 29 13 11:46 am Link

Model

Sakura Star

Posts: 42

London, England, United Kingdom

Sakura Star wrote:
Hi world of MM!

I've been llamaling since January this year and the two images below are from a D/s style shoot.  When I received the final images I was very proud of what I've done/achieved/how I look but these two specific shots surprised and shocked me although I love them both.  I've refused open leg shots but felt it was right for the stories each image portrays.

I'd appreciate critique, feedback and points to improve.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32153310 18

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31876078 18

Kind regards
Sakura x

After PMs of advice

Mar 30 13 05:22 am Link

Photographer

NewBoldPhoto

Posts: 4897

PORT MURRAY, New Jersey, US

Sakura Star wrote:

After PMs of advice & feedback I've removed the two pics.
Thank you.

They were not bad pics... just a bit- ah- forward.

Mar 30 13 07:16 am Link