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CaleeBee
Posts: 39
Ocala, Florida, US
I'm ready to be judged! lol I'm a beginner and only plan to expand my portfolio even more! 
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Connie Berchem
Posts: 10
Asheville, North Carolina, US
I'll put myself out there, please take a look?
Connie
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
CaleeBee wrote:
I'm ready to be judged! lol I'm a beginner and only plan to expand my portfolio even more! Awesome! Welcome to the wonderful world of modeling!
You definitely need to keep doing more professional shoots, only with photographers that will benefit your portfolio (unless you're being paid).
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32095985
This shot looks really fake. Probably my least favourite of yours.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#32095971
You look pretty here, but your pose doesn't look natural.
You need to work on looking more natural in your photos (body wise, and face wise unless the concept is more MUA related).
Good luck!
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain
Meghan Hale wrote:
... Thank you so much 
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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MickCetera
Posts: 276
Chicago, Illinois, US
Don't go easy on me because I liked your page.
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
MickCetera wrote:
Don't go easy on me because I liked your page. I'd suggest you make your display image one of just you, because the one it is now doesn't show people your "look", giving them an impression on you right away. I'd change it to this if I were you:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854402
You're a pretty handsome guy, and you look good with a bit of a beard, and without one, which is good.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28976912
This is a good photo because it shows that you can not only work the handsome sweet look, but a tougher one as well.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854737
I don't like this, simply because of the editing. The blue isn't done that well.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854556
Your pose in this is pretty bad. You look like you've been shot, and your pose is way too forced.
I do think you have potential, and your height is a bit of a setback, but you have a great look.
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Carina N
Posts: 6
Franklin, Michigan, US
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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MonicaM
Posts: 7
Tacoma, Washington, US
Me please I'm a beginner so any help is appreciated.
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MickCetera
Posts: 276
Chicago, Illinois, US
Meghan Hale wrote:
I'd suggest you make your display image one of just you, because the one it is now doesn't show people your "look", giving them an impression on you right away. I'd change it to this if I were you:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854402
You're a pretty handsome guy, and you look good with a bit of a beard, and without one, which is good.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28976912
This is a good photo because it shows that you can not only work the handsome sweet look, but a tougher one as well.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854737
I don't like this, simply because of the editing. The blue isn't done that well.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31854556
Your pose in this is pretty bad. You look like you've been shot, and your pose is way too forced.
I do think you have potential, and your height is a bit of a setback, but you have a great look. Thanks! I'm taking your advice on the avatar change, that makes a lot of sense. I just wanted it to get some love for a while cuase it was new haha. And I appreciate your opinion of the last photo, I need to make cuts again soon, I like limiting myself to less than 15 photos on here, it means I keep forcing improvement!
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
MonicaM wrote:
Me please I'm a beginner so any help is appreciated. I re-wrote your "about me" section keeping only important information and phrasing it to sound much more professional. I do this a lot and hopefully you're not offended, I'm just a picky English lover.
I'm Monica, an 18 year old newcomer to modeling, something I'm very interested in. I don't have very much experience, other than working with photographer friends, but I work great with direction and am interested in trying out new things!---
I'm currently graduating which takes away a lot of my time to shoot, but after that I'm looking to get back in to it.
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Now for your photos
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32526269
This is pretty and shows a lot of potential.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#32526262
Really amateur, and you should also mention your tattoo in your bio.
Honestly you have potential but it's hard to give you a good critique because of your lack of variety in your portfolio. You need to work on much better posing and expression. You can't just stand there and look pretty.
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Olivia Martin
Posts: 227
Mount Dora, Florida, US
What should I do different?
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Olivia Ashton wrote:
What should I do different? Work with MUCH better photographers. About half of your photos are lacking in quality from the photography side, which ruins the whole image.
Also, try and work on your expressions. They all look too happy, which is okay, but if you're interested in other genres you need to get better with more serious and relaxed expressions.
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anncambell
Posts: 6
Austin, Texas, US
I would love to hear your feedback- especially in what I am missing, since I have just started building my portfolio. Thank you!
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
hbenton wrote:
I would love to hear your feedback- especially in what I am missing, since I have just started building my portfolio. Thank you! I'm officially a fan of you.
You should let your talent agency give you the most direction, but I'd love to give my input.
You should have more conceptual and interesting concepts in your portfolio, as well as high fashion.
You look slightly stiff and awkward in some of your photos. Try and relax.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#32390908
This looks slightly amateur. I'm not loving the cropped photo with that styling.
Overall you have so much potential. Keep up the great work.
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anncambell
Posts: 6
Austin, Texas, US
Thank you so much
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MonicaM
Posts: 7
Tacoma, Washington, US
Meghan Hale wrote:
I re-wrote your "about me" section keeping only important information and phrasing it to sound much more professional. I do this a lot and hopefully you're not offended, I'm just a picky English lover.
I'm Monica, an 18 year old newcomer to modeling, something I'm very interested in. I don't have very much experience, other than working with photographer friends, but I work great with direction and am interested in trying out new things!---
I'm currently graduating which takes away a lot of my time to shoot, but after that I'm looking to get back in to it.
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Now for your photos
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32526269
This is pretty and shows a lot of potential.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#32526262
Really amateur, and you should also mention your tattoo in your bio.
Honestly you have potential but it's hard to give you a good critique because of your lack of variety in your portfolio. You need to work on much better posing and expression. You can't just stand there and look pretty. Thank you so much for all the help and advice!
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Amelia Vane
Posts: 93
Somerville, Massachusetts, US
Hi, I'd love a critique on my port!
Thanks, Amelia
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GlammGodd
Posts: 1
Washington, District of Columbia, US
LauraPaige wrote:
Go for it! Just don't rip me apart. Hahaha. Yes Yes,,, I agree please do so ! and i already liked your fb page
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Elena Antonia Pappas
Posts: 946
Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa
OK.... lets hear it from a sixteen year old gorgeous and smart girl
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Asianmodel
Posts: 29
Maastricht, Limburg, Netherlands
what do you think about me ?
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Alexxis Johnson
Posts: 15
San Diego, California, US
I'd love some critiques, thank you for your help
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Alexxis Johnson wrote:
I'd love some critiques, thank you for your help Before even clicking on your name I was excited to critique you because your display image drew me in.
You have quite a large portfolio so I would suggest deleting a few, and only keeping the best of the best. I would suggest dumping these, because of either awkward posing or expressions, bad lighting, not flattering, etc.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31926547
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31926541
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31926453
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31926444
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32579830
Mostly just old, amateur work.
Your newer images are FANTASTIC.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32579776
The dress should have been ironed and I don't like the boots, but I really do like your pose and the overall photo.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32579809
You look scared, like you're about to fall.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32374917
So beautiful. I love the styling and location.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32374909
Definitely your best photo. I love your expression, pose, styling, location, everything.
You're doing great and have so much potential, but you've worked with a few not-so-great photographers. I'd keep those out of your portfolio.
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Toria Pardoe
Posts: 113
Stoke-on-Trent, England, United Kingdom
I would definitely like to hear your opinion!
I re-activated my account after several months silence, but haven't done a new shoot yet, so all of my photos are from before (though I did delete them all in the deactivation process, which was probably silly).
I would love some feedback on what I've done and what I could improve upon. I kind of feel like I'm starting from scratch again, since I hadn't done all that much modelling beforehand...
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Toria Pardoe wrote:
I would definitely like to hear your opinion!
I re-activated my account after several months silence, but haven't done a new shoot yet, so all of my photos are from before (though I did delete them all in the deactivation process, which was probably silly).
I would love some feedback on what I've done and what I could improve upon. I kind of feel like I'm starting from scratch again, since I hadn't done all that much modelling beforehand... I know what it's like. I stopped for 9 months and only re-started in January. It's hard to get back in to it at first but you still have your skills!
I honestly LOVE your look with short hair.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529219
I love your connection with the camera.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529209
Great work by all. You have perfect skin.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529239
Your eyes look half asleep. I don't like this very much.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529228
The pushed out chin doesn't work well for you.
I love your look and you have so much potential, I hope you get back in to modeling and don't stop
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Toria Pardoe
Posts: 113
Stoke-on-Trent, England, United Kingdom
Meghan Hale wrote:
I know what it's like. I stopped for 9 months and only re-started in January. It's hard to get back in to it at first but you still have your skills!
I honestly LOVE your look with short hair.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529219
I love your connection with the camera.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529209
Great work by all. You have perfect skin.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529239
Your eyes look half asleep. I don't like this very much.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32529228
The pushed out chin doesn't work well for you.
I love your look and you have so much potential, I hope you get back in to modeling and don't stop Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm ever so grateful. The first two you mentioned are two of my favourites, and I agree for sure about the second two.
Unfortunately none of them are as I currently look - My hair's now light blonde and shoulder length, but I'm uploading my Actor headshot temporarily so I can show what I look like right now. I did like having short hair, but it's much easier having it longer, lol!
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Inertia Creeps
Posts: 102
Sunnyvale, California, US
Let me know your thoughts!
Inertia
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Sophia Grey
Posts: 69
Yuma, Arizona, US
Updated my port... Would love to hear what u thnk
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Worakarn
Posts: 8
Marietta, Georgia, US
I would appreciate any feedback you have. I will like your Facebook page now.
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Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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& if you would be so kind...Will you like my FB page as well??? (I already liked yours & just keep in mind that mine's a work-in-progress lol) 
