Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > Will critique any model's portfolio!

Model

Vinny

Posts: 95

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

Megan, please critique me!

Jun 04 13 11:02 pm Link

Model

Mitra Khalili

Posts: 4

Birmingham, Alabama, US

Sure, go ahead and critique mine:) I am looking forward to this.

Jun 04 13 11:09 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Vinny  wrote:
Megan, please critique me!

Of course! Sometimes on here, the links mess up and all open to the same photo. If that happens, just copy and paste the end numbers and add it to the end of the modelmayhem picture link.

First of all the fact that your profile says 116 years old turns me away.  If I were looking for a male model and say that, I'd just keep looking.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32845894
This is definitely my favourite in your portfolio. The connection you have with the female model is beautiful.  Overall gorgeous photo.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32805212
A little too silly for me to consider a model's photo...

Overall you're doing good and have some neat facial expressions, though you need to work with more talented photographers.

Jun 05 13 02:49 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Mitra Khalili wrote:
Sure, go ahead and critique mine:) I am looking forward to this.

Of course, and thank you for liking my page!

If the links all go to the same photo, copy the end numbers and then cut and paste onto another photo link. I've been having problems with this lately.

The first two images with the heavy black border would probably look better without the border.  They're good photos, but the black is distracting.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803886
This is cute. Good styling and decent photography, beautiful use of light.  I would have taken the hand that you cannot see and propped it up slightly on to your leg to make it visible, and your face would have looked much prettier angled closer to the camera.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803833
So beautiful. One of your best photos for sure.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803801
This pose is fantastic!

You've got some pretty good photos and concepts you've done.  I'd suggest working with higher quality photographers because a lot of your photos are blurry and out of focus.

But beautiful look and best of luck!

Jun 05 13 02:55 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Meghan Hale wrote:

Of course, and thank you for liking my page!

If the links all go to the same photo, copy the end numbers and then cut and paste onto another photo link. I've been having problems with this lately.

The first two images with the heavy black border would probably look better without the border.  They're good photos, but the black is distracting.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803886
This is cute. Good styling and decent photography, beautiful use of light.  I would have taken the hand that you cannot see and propped it up slightly on to your leg to make it visible, and your face would have looked much prettier angled closer to the camera. Stupid link. This one is supposed to be the one of you outdoors, copy the end link to please...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803833
So beautiful. One of your best photos for sure.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32803801
This pose is fantastic!

You've got some pretty good photos and concepts you've done.  I'd suggest working with higher quality photographers because a lot of your photos are blurry and out of focus.

But beautiful look and best of luck!

Jun 05 13 02:56 pm Link

Model

V marie

Posts: 903

Colorado Springs, Colorado, US

Would love to. I'm bored. smile

Jun 05 13 03:14 pm Link

Model

Angee Leena

Posts: 8

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I'd love to get a good critique (: you can be mean I'm ready for it.
if you want to email it even better angelinaconnuli@hotmail.com

Jun 05 13 09:15 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

v marie wrote:
Would love to. I'm bored. smile

If the links all go to the same photo, copy the end numbers and then cut and paste onto another photo link. I've been having problems with this lately.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32006036
Man this is so cool. So much better than a lot of shadow photos I've seen.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29413593
All of these except for the second one down on the left (a bit duck-face ish) are pretty cool. Shows your versatility.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29336587
Not sure if it is or just really edited, but the background looks too shopped in. I'd delete it if I were you. One of your worst pictures.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29631852
Probably my favourite.

You have a lot of photos in your portfolio. I'd suggest deleting a few, because there are some not-so-great ones hidden in there. But your photos are for the most part awesome.

Jun 06 13 05:57 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Angelina Catalina wrote:
I'd love to get a good critique (: you can be mean I'm ready for it.
if you want to email it even better angelinaconnuli@hotmail.com

Sent smile

Jun 06 13 06:02 pm Link

Model

Miaa Rigby

Posts: 361

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Id be very interested...

page is liked! like me back...

http://www.facebook.com/miaarigby

Jun 06 13 09:30 pm Link

Model

Kenneth Kao

Posts: 16

Boulder, Colorado, US

New here, so I'd love a good crit smile.  Thanks for taking the time!

Jun 07 13 02:23 pm Link

Model

Madison P Cook

Posts: 136

Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada

Hey!  I'm not sure if you're still doing this thread but I would love your opinion, your work is wonderful and I'd love your thoughts.  Great to see another Canadian girl on MM!   Thank you! -MC

Jun 08 13 11:42 am Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Miaa Rigby wrote:
Id be very interested...

page is liked! like me back...

http://www.facebook.com/miaarigby

Sorry it took so long!

Sometimes on here, the links mess up and all open to the same photo. If that happens, just copy and paste the end numbers and add it to the end of the modelmayhem picture link.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32874574
The lighting is awkward and you look a bit scared but it's a decent photo. Very pretty.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32874529
This is beautiful, though it makes you look short.

You have a lot of potential but you need to try some more styles of modeling.  Aim for a few simple concepts.

Jun 09 13 01:00 pm Link

Model

Eugene Antoine

Posts: 4

Columbia, Missouri, US

Sure!

Jun 09 13 10:33 pm Link

Model

Cyn Michelle

Posts: 80

Vallejo, California, US

Would really love to hear what you have to say!

Jun 10 13 12:22 am Link

Model

agnuzele

Posts: 2

Alytus, Alytaus, Lithuania

I'm interested too!

Jun 10 13 12:45 pm Link

Model

Cherrie Nova

Posts: 549

Fairfield, California, US

"Liked" your page. Very nice work. Now I'm asking for the critique. wink Please, and thank you.

Jun 10 13 12:50 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Kenneth Kao wrote:
New here, so I'd love a good crit smile.  Thanks for taking the time!

Sorry for taking so long!
Sometimes on here, the links mess up and all open to the same photo. If that happens, just copy and paste the end numbers and add it to the end of the modelmayhem picture link.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32782341
This looks mid-pose.  Not a great shot.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32782277
Not very flattering and awkward.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32782001
Holy cow. This is honestly beautiful, intense, and wonderful.  Keep on doing this, you're pretty talented and can go far. 

All of your pole photos are breathtaking.  Keep focusing on that.

Jun 10 13 05:25 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Madison P Cook wrote:
Hey!  I'm not sure if you're still doing this thread but I would love your opinion, your work is wonderful and I'd love your thoughts.  Great to see another Canadian girl on MM!   Thank you! -MC

Sorry for taking so long!
Sometimes on here, the links mess up and all open to the same photo. If that happens, just copy and paste the end numbers and add it to the end of the modelmayhem picture link.

I think I've critiqued you before? If not, I've looked through your photos a million times.  You're beautiful, and I'm a fan. smile

Even if I have critiqued you in this or another thread, I'll still do it again.


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#32888383
The quality of this photo isn't the greatest.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#32888380
This is flawless. You manage to pull of sexy, yet pretty, at such a younger age (though you are older than me smile).

Your honestly so diverse and you have so much potential. Keep on doing what you're doing!

Jun 10 13 05:28 pm Link

Model

Jyanavar

Posts: 8

New York, New York, US

Wow, I can't believe how many people you've given crits to! Super amazing of you. I'd love one too, if you're not too swamped. smile

Jun 10 13 06:57 pm Link

Model

Kenneth Kao

Posts: 16

Boulder, Colorado, US

Thank you so much!  I appreciate the detailed crit, and the compliment smile.

Jun 10 13 10:02 pm Link

Photographer

Rodrigo Perez

Posts: 12

Tampa, Florida, US

I'd really be interested in hearing your opinion on my work. Thanks

Jun 10 13 10:07 pm Link

Model

Meg Tyler

Posts: 10

Groningen, Groningen, Netherlands

would appreciate some critique too!

Jun 11 13 11:29 am Link

Model

Necie Aevum

Posts: 4

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I would LOVE your critique!  Thank you in advance!

~Necie Aevum

Jun 13 13 03:26 pm Link

Model

Raven Blake

Posts: 58

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

smile

Jun 27 13 10:07 pm Link

Model

Dani-Mae

Posts: 59

Bladenboro, North Carolina, US

Me please?

Jul 04 13 10:09 am Link

Model

Eli McClain

Posts: 8

New York, New York, US

Hi I was wondering if you would critique my small portfolio. I am still new to the modeling world and would like as much critique as possible. I am going to like your facebook page in a minute and would appreciate the comments so much.
Thank you in advance,
Eli McClain

Jul 05 13 10:39 am Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Im interested smile

Jul 05 13 08:36 pm Link

Model

Ruth Gray

Posts: 48

Portland, Maine, US

How can I improve?

Jul 05 13 11:03 pm Link

Model

Raven Blake

Posts: 58

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Hi,
Would love some critique.
What else should I add to my port, and what images should go.
I have two very similar shots, don't know which I should take off.
Thank you smile

Jul 08 13 04:17 pm Link

Model

Ashlei Doll

Posts: 19

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

I would love a critique! I liked your FB page smile Danke!!

XOXO
Ashlei

Jul 09 13 09:39 pm Link

Model

Kurly Smith

Posts: 89

Georgetown, Ontario, Canada

If you are still doing this I would love you to have a look at my portfolio!

Jul 10 13 08:38 pm Link

Photographer

Rodrigo Perez

Posts: 12

Tampa, Florida, US

I'm going to take a wild guess and say there won't be any more critiques in this thread lol

Jul 27 13 09:06 pm Link

Model

Jenny Warner

Posts: 2

Windsor, Ontario, Canada

I would appreciate feedback, I'm new

Jul 28 13 11:27 pm Link

Model

Jaida Nicole Brooks

Posts: 3

Cambridge, Massachusetts, US

I would appreciate a critique of my profile. thanks

Jul 29 13 05:04 pm Link

Model

Donnie Dae

Posts: 90

Brooklyn, New York, US

By all means

Jul 30 13 08:41 am Link

Model

Jaida Nicole Brooks

Posts: 3

Cambridge, Massachusetts, US

I would appreciate feedback. I am new here . Thanks in advance

Jul 30 13 09:13 am Link

Model

Razeal

Posts: 36

Fontana, California, US

Let me have it! What do I need? I am NOT talking about making fun I am talking honesty. On THIS FORUM NOT UNDER my PICTURES!

Jul 30 13 01:06 pm Link

Model

Noelle Monroe

Posts: 2

Sacramento, California, US

I'd love a critique  please.

Jul 30 13 08:36 pm Link

Model

Katherine Slama

Posts: 1

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Please look over mine! I need to know if I have any potential at all. The only photos I have are from my senior pics but I will be having more coming.

Jul 31 13 05:27 am Link