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Retoucher

vtrantien

Posts: 689

Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam

(Taken by #2704148)

Before

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8102/8641883742_a61b5f4da4_c.jpg


After

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8259/8639971836_fdc8c62fc2_c.jpg

Apr 11 13 05:13 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3820

Lodi, California, US

I think all the changes are positives, with the exception of her hair.
I prefer most of the look of it in the original.

Apr 11 13 06:56 pm Link

Retoucher

NickWatson

Posts: 59

London, England, United Kingdom

over retouched, she looks bruised under her cheekbone. also learn to look at the image as a whole, i find the creases in the curtains immediately distracting before i even get to the girl. try and be more subtle with dnb, less contouring and work on overall distractions first and then colour. hope this helps.

May 02 13 06:52 am Link