Forums > Critique > Would I list your black and white image?

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Just as the subject mentions, would I list your black and white image?

This is just a game, nothing serious. Here are the rules:

-your image must be a black and white image
-all genres/styles are fair game
-the image you share must be currently in your port on MM

I will either list your image if I like it, or say pass if I don't. You are welcome to re-submit multiple images, but they must be a separate link per post.

who is game?

Apr 17 13 11:11 pm Link

Photographer

Sedition1216

Posts: 273

Buffalo, New York, US

Apr 17 13 11:20 pm Link

Photographer

Sedition1216

Posts: 273

Buffalo, New York, US

Apr 17 13 11:21 pm Link

Photographer

Sedition1216

Posts: 273

Buffalo, New York, US

Apr 17 13 11:21 pm Link

Model

Kasey Lestrange

Posts: 25

Costa Mesa, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/21/5017609348edc_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 11:22 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Sedition wrote:
18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32335220

I give you props for trying something different with the lighting on this image, but pass on this one.

Apr 17 13 11:22 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Sedition wrote:
18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32295902

I was on the verge of listing this one short of the models expression and blown out face. Keep going with the top lighting though. pass on this one.

Apr 17 13 11:23 pm Link

Photographer

StudioKawaii

Posts: 26

Los Angeles, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/19/511862a6800f0_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 11:25 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Sedition wrote:
18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32334123

Ok, I'm done big_smile (for now) tongue

Listed! the detail in the hair in particular with the one strand going into the negative space of the darkness is what caught my eye in this image.

Apr 17 13 11:25 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Kasey Lestrange wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/21/5017609348edc_m.jpg

Listed! I am honestly not a fan of the size/placement of the water mark, but your expression along with the hair and make up were what sold this image.

Apr 17 13 11:27 pm Link

Photographer

Sedition1216

Posts: 273

Buffalo, New York, US

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! the detail in the hair in particular with the one strand going into the negative space of the darkness is what caught my eye in this image.

Thanks. I figured one would have to make he cut! big_smile All those images are shot in the cab of a semi truck by the way. *edit. They are also all composite images...

Apr 17 13 11:28 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

Check it out. Maybe.

Apr 17 13 11:28 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

StudioKawaii wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/19/511862a6800f0_m.jpg

Pass. Sorry, but this one has the look of your model being bored in studio trying to escape the camera, and with the usage of the single octa box placement, the lighting feels a little flat for my tastes. please feel free to play again.

Apr 17 13 11:29 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

richardsphotographybc wrote:
Check it out. Maybe.

link please?

Apr 17 13 11:30 pm Link

Model

Kasey Lestrange

Posts: 25

Costa Mesa, California, US

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! I am honestly not a fan of the size/placement of the water mark, but your expression along with the hair and make up were what sold this image.

thanks! I appreciate it smile

Apr 17 13 11:34 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120623/12/4fe61f53b1fd4_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 11:38 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/16/50d79d2118968_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 11:39 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

richardsphotographybc wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120623/12/4fe61f53b1fd4_m.jpg

pass. sorry, but the models pose is quite awkward on this image. It feels like she is trying to do a combination of broken doll vs. beam me up Scotty. please feel free to play again though.

Apr 17 13 11:40 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130407/11/5161b87b8aec0_m.jpg

Apr 17 13 11:41 pm Link

Apr 17 13 11:42 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

richardsphotographybc wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130407/11/5161b87b8aec0_m.jpg

pass. sorry, pretty girl, but the pose and lighting are both boring in this one. Maybe try something with multiple lights, and give her a cup of espresso for next shoot? please feel free to play again.

Apr 17 13 11:44 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8435

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Apr 17 13 11:45 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Here's a bunch:

psssttt... somebody didn't read the rules  ^___^.... one image per post in the thread please.

Apr 17 13 11:46 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30596740 18+

Listed! with regards to my previous post about one image per post in the thread (it gets crazy to remember which one I liked out of a bunch all at once)... This one is quite lovely from the movement of your subject in the air, to the light that is nicely balancing the frame on the lower right.

Apr 17 13 11:49 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Images by MR wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17482196

Listed! Normally I would not be a fan of the crop at the shins, but the movement, tonality, and usage of space in this image are intriguing.

Apr 17 13 11:50 pm Link

Photographer

Sedition1216

Posts: 273

Buffalo, New York, US

Ok, screw it one more... Kind of creepy, won't bother with the super creepy one though. tongue
18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32335295

Apr 17 13 11:52 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2551

Los Angeles, California, US

Charlie-CNP wrote:
Listed! with regards to my previous post about one image per post in the thread (it gets crazy to remember which one I liked out of a bunch all at once)... This one is quite lovely from the movement of your subject in the air, to the light that is nicely balancing the frame on the lower right.

Sorry, I missed that about one image per post. Figured I'd save some space.

Apr 17 13 11:55 pm Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Sedition wrote:
Ok, screw it one more... Kind of creepy, won't bother with the super creepy one though. tongue
18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32335295

pass. Its not really the creepy that I am passing on either. A good horror style image never hurt anyone (as long as everyone in the room is still able to tell the tale afterwards of course), but for me this image just does not have enough information in it to put it into context. Maybe a little bit more rim lighting next time on the figure to bring out more to your viewers and it could be a hit. The mirrored forms in the negative space make almost a sleeping creature form if you let your eyes bounce around in the space, but still a bit more light perhaps. please feel free to play again.

Apr 17 13 11:59 pm Link

Photographer

Miser Photography

Posts: 102

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

Here is one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/16/5165f88ce661c_m.jpg

Apr 18 13 12:04 am Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

keep the posts coming. I will check this thread tomorrow to do more.

Apr 18 13 12:05 am Link

Photographer

Charlie-CNP

Posts: 2644

New York, New York, US

Miser Photography wrote:
Here is one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130410/16/5165f88ce661c_m.jpg

last one before sleep for the night.

pass. the mood and expression of this image work well, but I can't get past the hair over the portion of her eyeball, and the loose strands right above the lip honestly. They just detract from the overall flow of the image for me. please feel free to play again.

Apr 18 13 12:07 am Link

Photographer

Doce Vida

Posts: 20

Los Angeles, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130418/00/516f9cf4e1057.jpg

Apr 18 13 12:14 am Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8435

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Charlie-CNP wrote:

Listed! Normally I would not be a fan of the crop at the shins, but the movement, tonality, and usage of space in this image are intriguing.

Thank you smile

Apr 18 13 12:20 am Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Apr 18 13 12:24 am Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Apr 18 13 12:25 am Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Apr 18 13 12:27 am Link

Photographer

rfordphotos

Posts: 5097

Antioch, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130120/14/50fc75561f9ac_m.jpg

Apr 18 13 12:39 am Link

Photographer

rfordphotos

Posts: 5097

Antioch, California, US

or.. my current favorite:

18+  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32110355   18+

Apr 18 13 12:40 am Link

Photographer

rfordphotos

Posts: 5097

Antioch, California, US

or maybe:

18+  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30701678  18+


One way or another, thanks for taking a look smile

Apr 18 13 12:42 am Link

Model

Mary Zdo

Posts: 176

San Ramon, California, US

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b2ce711198_m.jpg
Maybe?

Apr 18 13 12:49 am Link