Please tell me where to improve and what photos I should remove, I have already removed two so far but with the the shoots i had last week, the big group shot this week and one next Sunday, I'm going to need more room.
So please tell me whats GOTTA GO!
Please keep your insulting comments to yourself, only real critiques apply.
Apr 21 13 03:25 pm Link
Orlando, Florida, US
Can a tare apart your spelling instead?
I'll be back with a better critique in a few minutes.
So here's what I'd suggest removing:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30437951 (instead choose the 3rd or 4th image instead)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30279643 (those are just not very good at all)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30256024 (technically poor images in that collage also)
You might be attached to some of those images, but they're really not doing anything for you that the other, stronger images aren't already. Separating yourself emotionally from images is often difficult to do, but you want to replace the weaker images with stronger ones. Sometimes, collages work. Yours don't really. At least not for me.
Apr 21 13 03:30 pm Link
Good Egg Productions wrote:
Thank you, I will take your critique under advisement and put a plan into action.
Apr 21 13 04:46 pm Link
Deleted a few photos from the links above, any more suggestions please let me know
Apr 21 13 05:34 pm Link
Colchester, Connecticut, US
your face expression does not look good here, you look bored.
Apr 21 13 05:42 pm Link
Trisha F Photography wrote:
I will consider removing it, I will be having new photos from that photographer soon, we shot yesterday afternoon,
Apr 21 13 05:47 pm Link