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Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 324

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Please tell me where to improve and what photos I should remove, I have already removed two so far but with the the shoots i had last week, the big group shot this week and one next Sunday, I'm going to need more room.

So please tell me whats GOTTA GO!
Please keep your insulting comments to yourself, only real critiques apply.

Thank you

Apr 21 13 03:25 pm Link

Photographer

Good Egg Productions

Posts: 15792

Orlando, Florida, US

Can a tare apart your spelling instead?

I'll be back with a better critique in a few minutes.


So here's what I'd suggest removing:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31688836
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31447441
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30954433
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30437951 (instead choose the 3rd or 4th image instead)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30279643 (those are just not very good at all)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30256024 (technically poor images in that collage also)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30176226


You might be attached to some of those images, but they're really not doing anything for you that the other, stronger images aren't already.  Separating yourself emotionally from images is often difficult to do, but you want to replace the weaker images with stronger ones.  Sometimes, collages work.  Yours don't really.  At least not for me.

Apr 21 13 03:30 pm Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 324

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Good Egg Productions wrote:
Can a tare apart your spelling instead?

I'll be back with a better critique in a few minutes.


So here's what I'd suggest removing:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31688836
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31447441
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30954433
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30437951 (instead choose the 3rd or 4th image instead)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30279643 (those are just not very good at all)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30256024 (technically poor images in that collage also)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30176226


You might be attached to some of those images, but they're really not doing anything for you that the other, stronger images aren't already.  Separating yourself emotionally from images is often difficult to do, but you want to replace the weaker images with stronger ones.  Sometimes, collages work.  Yours don't really.  At least not for me.

Thank you, I will take your critique under advisement and put a plan into action.

Apr 21 13 04:46 pm Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 324

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Deleted a few photos from the links above, any more suggestions please let me know

Apr 21 13 05:34 pm Link

Photographer

Trisha May Photography

Posts: 305

Colchester, Connecticut, US

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30954433

your face expression does not look good here, you look bored.

Apr 21 13 05:42 pm Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 324

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

Trisha F Photography wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30954433

your face expression does not look good here, you look bored.

I will consider removing it, I will be having new photos from that photographer soon, we shot yesterday afternoon,

Apr 21 13 05:47 pm Link