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Model

Francesca Lazzari

Posts: 237

Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom

I put up my new photos and haven't had much feedback on them.

I was wondering if i could have some sort of critique :')

bare in mind i am new and learning :')

Apr 21 13 04:15 pm Link

Photographer

Philip R

Posts: 599

Agoura Hills, California, US

From my point of view, you are progressing nicely in your posing.  The first picture doesn't have enough fill light, for my taste, and is not worth keeping in your portfolio.

Keep shooting with good photographers!

Apr 21 13 04:19 pm Link

Model

Francesca Lazzari

Posts: 237

Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom

Philip R wrote:
From my point of view, you are progressing nicely in your posing.  The first picture doesn't have enough fill light, for my taste, and is not worth keeping in your portfolio.

Keep shooting with good photographers!

Thankyou! big_smile
Is my avatar ok? :')

Apr 21 13 04:29 pm Link

Photographer

William Kious

Posts: 8841

Delphos, Ohio, US

I really like the image you're currently using as your avatar... there's a "vulnerability" in your facial expression that I find captivating.

Apr 21 13 04:33 pm Link

Model

Francesca Lazzari

Posts: 237

Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom

William Kious wrote:
I really like the image you're currently using as your avatar... there's a "vulnerability" in your facial expression that I find captivating.

Thankyou :')

Apr 21 13 04:37 pm Link

Photographer

Daeda1us

Posts: 1067

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Frann Lazzari wrote:
I put up my new photos and haven't had much feedback on them.

I was wondering if i could have some sort of critique :')

bare in mind i am new and learning :')

Ok, my opinion, nothing more:

I dont like your avatar.  Not because i dont like the pose, but because you are way too small.  I would like it better with a closer crop that showed more detail of you.

This is pretty much the same comment I have for the latest three in your portfolio.
There is not enough "you" in them.  A closer crop would improve these, imo.

I like your face.  You are very cute.  I see a lot of potential here.
But these... not showing you to your best advantage.

As I said at the beginning...
This is my opinion only.  Take it for what it is worth.

Hope you stick with it.  Interested in seeing more of your work!

Daeda1us

Apr 21 13 04:43 pm Link

Photographer

Yevgeniya Fedorov

Posts: 41

Forest Hills, New York, US

I really like the b/w photo and the one where you are sitting on the stairs. The rest lack something but I think you are very unique and I would keep at it.

Apr 23 13 02:40 pm Link

Model

Scarlett de la Calle

Posts: 414

Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia

I like these images of you:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111212/07/4ee61b3983107_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111212/06/4ee610f00c61a_m.jpg

Better than your newer ones. There seems to be too much spacing in your newer photos around you and you are not framed in a way that makes me look at you for longer than a second. So I guess this isn't an issue of yours but a photographic/Crop/Framing issue. Also the lighting in the tunnel is terrible its casting too much of a shadow on your face.

Keep shooting with photographers and practicing and only put the best of the best up. Get an eye for detail when it comes to what you put on the port because its not just about you looking pretty its also about the quality of the image as well

*all of this is a personal opinion and should be taken lightly*

Apr 23 13 02:52 pm Link

Model

Scarlett de la Calle

Posts: 414

Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia

Daeda1us wrote:
I dont like your avatar.  Not because i dont like the pose, but because you are way too small.  I would like it better with a closer crop that showed more detail of you.

Also agree with this about your avatar image.

Apr 23 13 02:54 pm Link