Forums > Critique > better expressions?

Model

Lillian Faith

Posts: 296

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Hey y'all!

I did a fun swimsuit shoot today and I got some pics back already. smile

I tried lots more expressions. How did I do?

Apr 23 13 09:18 pm Link

Model

Cole Morrison

Posts: 3958

Portland, Oregon, US

cute set, but they look like candids.

Apr 23 13 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

Marin Photography NYC

Posts: 7246

New York, New York, US

A little better, keep at it, it takes time.

Apr 23 13 09:25 pm Link

Model

Lillian Faith

Posts: 296

Atlanta, Georgia, US

It's something different for my port. I didn't have happy stuff in there lol.

Apr 23 13 09:25 pm Link

Photographer

SKITA Studios

Posts: 1566

Boston, Massachusetts, US

This works:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/5177581ab4dad_m.jpg


This didn't because you're mixing too much of a fashion pose w/ a commercial smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg

Nice smile, so you do have a nice commerial look.
Definitely keep experimenting w/ expressions...

Apr 24 13 07:18 am Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 27188

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

SKITA Studios wrote:
This didn't because you're mixing too much of a fashion pose w/ a commercial smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg

Nice smile, so you do have a nice commerial look.
Definitely keep experimenting w/ expressions...

I totally disagree . I think it is a very good picture

Apr 24 13 07:23 am Link

Photographer

AJ_In_Atlanta

Posts: 12826

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I think you showed more, good.  Some are a more commercial, and that could be exactly what your agency wants for you.

Overall I am not a big fan of the images, they look a lot like snapshots and are not composed or cropped well.

Apr 24 13 07:29 am Link

Photographer

Byron Chua

Posts: 231

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg
smile

Apr 24 13 09:41 am Link