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Carson B

Posts: 141

Oxnard, California, US

What should I take out?smile

Apr 23 13 11:20 pm Link



Posts: 1655

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

Um, OMG. That blue gown pic I just listed is GORGEOUS. I love it! :-D

I say to take out the following:

You don't need it. If I were you, I'd keep it either on your profile page, if you have the ability to do that, or in a "tear sheets" page or album on your website. (If you don't have a website, or at least a FB fan page, I recommend getting one.) Anyway, that's what I do with my tears. It makes the portfolio look less cluttered. smile

Very cliche. I'd have loved to see a high-fashion black and white with those wings, though, if you still have access to them.


I don't like them.

I hope I helped! :-D For what it's worth, I'd LOOOOVE to see some really high-key, Vogue-ish shots of you.

Apr 24 13 02:35 am Link


Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

Hey Carson,
How many do you want to eliminate?  Let me know and I'll tell you what should go and why...Afterwards, please check out my port and comment on the ones you feel deserve it...Deal?

Apr 24 13 02:48 am Link