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Model

Kirsti allen

Posts: 4

Stroud, England, United Kingdom

Its been a months or so since I have jumped back in front of the camera and I was simply wondering how I was doing?  Esp as a former agency llama ( being told how to look and make up done pretty much for me)
So if you have 2 mins take a gander at my profile and let me know
Meny thanks
Kirsti xx

Apr 25 13 12:34 pm Link

Photographer

robert b mitchell

Posts: 1454

Surrey, British Columbia, Canada

Well I definitely like your look, but some of your photos seem amateurish ( the photographer; not you) with the blowout of detail. They are standard shots that really do not garner alot of interest for an attractive lady like you. Its just an opinion....

Apr 25 13 12:41 pm Link

Photographer

J O H N A L L A N

Posts: 10308

Santa Ana, California, US

You don't seem to necessarily be giving the camera your best angles. I have no idea, but if you were doing this when you were younger, you may have to find your angles again based on your more evolved facial structure.

Apr 25 13 12:46 pm Link

Model

KellenJordan

Posts: 25

San Diego, California, US

beautiful gal

Apr 25 13 01:46 pm Link

Model

Kirsti allen

Posts: 4

Stroud, England, United Kingdom

Thank you all for you comments and yes I see what you all mean
Thank you for taking the time to look xxx

Apr 25 13 01:59 pm Link

Model

Meghan Hale

Posts: 335

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

You seem to be much more commercial than editorial.

Apr 25 13 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

RachelReilly

Posts: 1730

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Meghan Hale wrote:
You seem to be much more commercial than editorial.

I agree.
Also start practicing on your posing and facial expressions!
And work with better photographers!!
Best of luck smile

Apr 25 13 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Wendy Hurst Portrait

Posts: 245

North Salt Lake, Utah, US

Of all the images in the sequence, I'd keep this one:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130321/04/514af3c045e05_m.jpg

I also noticed your expression was almost identical in every shot. In this one you look particularly annoyed:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130409/03/5163f3f3dacbe_m.jpg

Even if that's what you were going for, the image doesn't add much to your portfolio. Do more shoots with moods like this:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130316/10/5144adeb1bdc5_m.jpg

!

May 01 13 09:20 pm Link