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Retoucher

vivera1977

Posts: 77

Rumia, Pomorskie, Poland

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May 07 13 01:53 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3075

Lodi, California, US

I like the retouch, but the color and saturation go too far for me,
like the cheek bone contour, also highlights should have less
saturation, not more, hair can be neatened up a little.

May 07 13 05:13 pm Link

Photographer

robert b mitchell

Posts: 1454

Surrey, British Columbia, Canada

I disagree with the above comment. I think there is far too much contouring on the cheeks and the hair is fine. So are the highlights. Love the shading on the browbone.

May 07 13 05:25 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3075

Lodi, California, US

that is what I was saying, I should have said example/ rouge on cheeks over sat. at transition zone of highlight. Sorry for confusion.

May 07 13 06:06 pm Link

Retoucher

Retouch007

Posts: 403

East Newark, New Jersey, US

look at difference in the skin it looks as if you ran a filter on it and made it look plastic. I prefer the look on the original over the retouch.

May 07 13 06:24 pm Link

Retoucher

vivera1977

Posts: 77

Rumia, Pomorskie, Poland

Thank you very much

May 08 13 07:47 am Link

Photographer

alicazkrajinky

Posts: 18

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

i likethe hair, the color in the cheeks for me a bit to much and i would liquify the nose a bit. My opinion mate smile

May 08 13 12:18 pm Link

Retoucher

LarrySparks Photography

Posts: 116

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

nice!! smile

Aug 07 13 03:11 am Link

Retoucher

Alyssa June Retouch

Posts: 170

Denver, Colorado, US

Nice job the eye shadow, cheeks are a bit overdone for me.
I agree hair could use a little cleaning up - along the forehead and maybe turn down the contrast/saturation a bit?

Just my 2cents
smile

Aug 10 13 03:04 am Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

Zoom out when you work. You lost yourself in the detail, and now the whole thing is odd.

The model looks odd to begin with.

Start with an easier image. smile

Sep 18 13 06:15 am Link