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Mrcsb

Posts: 82

Nyíregyháza, Szabolcs-Szatmár-Bereg, Hungary

May 20 13 07:12 am Link

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Ashish Arora

Posts: 2068

Paris, Île-de-France, France

From what I can see - it doesn't seem you spent more than a few minutes on the image, it still needs a lot of good skin work, esp. around the mouth, the hands and some distracting flyaway hair need to be cloned out.

Regarding tones - skin is too pale and makes her look like she has a fever.

May 23 13 10:48 am Link

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Mrcsb

Posts: 82

Nyíregyháza, Szabolcs-Szatmár-Bereg, Hungary

Oh it looks like i should buy a new monitor - i just checked it on my friend's, and the colors are different.

Thank you for the reply smile

May 25 13 03:21 am Link

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Ovidiu Oltean

Posts: 179

Sibiu, Sibiu, Romania

Hello,
Actually i like the colors and the skin, you did a good job, just try focusing on the small details also.
On the hair for example you can take out the hairs that don't match with the flow of the rest .On skin just small things as you can see on the quick sketch i made for you.
The eyebrow need a bit work, the dust from the lense needs to be removed and the eye from the left side of the image needs a bit light.
Good luck and good job again .

http://s4.postimg.org/l6iyzwdcp/pz62_Vb_K.jpg

Jun 05 13 08:02 pm Link

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LarrySparks Photography

Posts: 117

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

This feels somewhat incomplete, cant put my finger on it....*thinking face*

Aug 07 13 02:57 am Link