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Model

Chloe Haze

Posts: 25

Florence, South Carolina, US

Added a ton of new photos within the past month. Let me know what you think best and worst, and I will respond with the same

May 20 13 04:53 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2027

Chicago, Illinois, US

Zoey Blanche wrote:
Added a ton of new photos within the past month. Let me know what you think best and worst, and I will respond with the same

Best
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/51095e31de19e_m.jpg

Worst
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31600944

May 20 13 05:37 pm Link

Photographer

Personal Photograph

Posts: 245

Davenport, Iowa, US

I agree with the post above for your best.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32694263#

The link above is just too far away and is probably your worst.

May 20 13 05:49 pm Link

May 20 13 07:41 pm Link

Model

Chloe Haze

Posts: 25

Florence, South Carolina, US

Joseph William

best
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29502957

Worst
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19303110
mainly because I feel she has a dead face. I feel the pose is good, as well is location, but the expression is off

something I noticed is a lot of models lacked a connection with the camera, or a distant expression where I feel a smile would be beneficial but thats just my 2 cents

May 21 13 08:48 am Link

Model

Chloe Haze

Posts: 25

Florence, South Carolina, US

Personal Photograph

ok I had 3 faves it was tough narrowing it down
I ended up choosing this one
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28341996

Worst
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30928165
I am not a fan of the lighting used

All in all enjoyable port, I like the connection, and the expressions on many of them, particularly the topless/ nude smirks.

May 21 13 08:53 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5647

New York, New York, US

Your Best:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/09/51095e31de19e_m.jpg
Lovely black/white tones, cute pose, great overall capture of you.

Worst:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/15/519aa532e895a_m.jpg
You're far away and the focus is not on you. Plus it looks like a snapshot

May 21 13 08:54 am Link

Model

Chloe Haze

Posts: 25

Florence, South Carolina, US

May 21 13 08:57 am Link

Model

Chloe Haze

Posts: 25

Florence, South Carolina, US

winking_wonder

best
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31169426

worst
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26606345
its an awkward pose and your body is cut off awkwardly

May 21 13 09:03 am Link