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Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Just added 12 new pictures (mostly nudes) in on the top three rows of my gallery and your feedback and critique would be greatly appreciated. Thank you kindly. Arya x

May 21 13 07:48 am Link

Photographer

Laurence Moan

Posts: 7783

Huntington Beach, California, US

All lovely.
Your portfolio just keeps getting better.

May 21 13 09:10 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21390

Orlando, Florida, US

That's it  .  .  .  I'm movin' to Bangkok, just to shoot you  .  .  .  wink  Nicely done  .  .  .  especially liked the lace one  .  .  .

SOS

May 21 13 10:36 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Laurence Moan wrote:
All lovely.
Your portfolio just keeps getting better.

Thank you for commentary smile

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 21 13 05:41 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

sospix wrote:
That's it  .  .  .  I'm movin' to Bangkok, just to shoot you  .  .  .  wink  Nicely done  .  .  .  especially liked the lace one  .  .  .

SOS

Ok i will waiting you come to bangkok and  anyway thank you for comment sir.

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 21 13 05:43 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2027

Chicago, Illinois, US

Very impressive work

May 21 13 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

Yen Studios

Posts: 789

Memphis, Tennessee, US

very nice, the photography is very well done and you the model is amazing.  Absolutely well done.  If you ever come to the USA I would love to photograph you

May 21 13 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

Chuckarelei

Posts: 9566

Seattle, Washington, US

"Like"

May 21 13 06:45 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Joseph William  wrote:
Very impressive work

Thank you Mr.Joseph its very aprrecaite for your comment.

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 21 13 07:26 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Yen Studios wrote:
very nice, the photography is very well done and you the model is amazing.  Absolutely well done.  If you ever come to the USA I would love to photograph you

Thank you so much for you kindly comment my photography and i will let you know if I have chance to go there anyway thank you again smile

Kind regards,
Arya T.

May 21 13 07:29 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Chuckarelei wrote:
"Like"

"Thank you". smile

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 21 13 07:30 pm Link

Photographer

Danielson Photography

Posts: 4

Pleasanton, California, US

Beautiful work. I think your strength is in the face and body language. You seem comfortable and it does not feel forced in most of the new shots...very good job. I feel that in some of them the leg angles are a bit odd and disconnected. Overall though...amazing work.

May 21 13 10:22 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Danielson Photography wrote:
Beautiful work. I think your strength is in the face and body language. You seem comfortable and it does not feel forced in most of the new shots...very good job. I feel that in some of them the leg angles are a bit odd and disconnected. Overall though...amazing work.

Thank you for all commentary its help full .

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 22 13 07:08 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photography NYC

Posts: 7248

New York, New York, US

Impressive!

May 22 13 07:15 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Marin Photography wrote:
Impressive!

Thank you sir.

Arya T.

May 22 13 07:33 am Link

Artist/Painter

MainePaintah

Posts: 1782

Saco, Maine, US

Wonderful poses and some awesome photographs!

2 thumbs up!

May 22 13 07:45 am Link

Photographer

nyk fury

Posts: 2918

Port Townsend, Washington, US

extremely generic results, for the most part. you have much better earlier.

May 22 13 07:52 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

MainePaintah wrote:
Wonderful poses and some awesome photographs!

2 thumbs up!

Thank you sir.

Arya T.

May 22 13 07:55 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

nyk fury wrote:
extremely generic results, for the most part. you have much better earlier.

Thank you for comments sir,

Arya T.

May 22 13 07:58 am Link

Photographer

AJ_In_Atlanta

Posts: 12835

Atlanta, Georgia, US

I like them and you expression fits them, but its the same expression in a lot of them.  I would cut them back to fewer so its not so repetitious.  You show a range over all but I feel this could distract from that.

Again nice images, just cull them a little

May 22 13 08:07 am Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

AJScalzitti wrote:
I like them and you expression fits them, but its the same expression in a lot of them.  I would cut them back to fewer so its not so repetitious.  You show a range over all but I feel this could distract from that.

Again nice images, just cull them a little

I knew that.And I will try to difference expression anyway thank you for helpful comment sir.

Kind regards,

Arya T.

May 22 13 04:45 pm Link

Photographer

4 R D

Posts: 1058

Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico

They all are fine serviceable shots, but none stands out or is truly memorable. I agree with the comment made earlier by someone else, they look generic. You have better pictures.

May 24 13 08:35 am Link

Photographer

Refrain Photography

Posts: 32

Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada

#5, #7, and #9 are my favorites with the two under the window being my first two fav's.

I do like the one against the tree as well but don't like the 'coloring' of the photo.

May 24 13 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

ATR

Posts: 34

San Jose, California, US

my fav of the portfolio is   http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32710658    very well done in front of the lens in nature. for me this is soft, beautiful and graceful and moving when i look at it. 

next is    http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32701521    here i see an early emotional separation or cause of, into pieces as a result from something good the morning of.  very nice piece.

something constructive to say hummm…… you are producing really nice work and would like to see more like my fav image of your port. I think more creativity would add very well to your port.

ATR...

May 24 13 08:44 pm Link

Photographer

RLA Photo

Posts: 222

Lake Elsinore, California, US

I wish I had known you were there when I was in Bangkok last November.  Hopefully I can make another trip there soon.  Very impressive work.  Really Love it!

May 24 13 08:52 pm Link

Photographer

rxz

Posts: 147

Glen Ellyn, Illinois, US

I like the lace image, but #'s 1, 7, 11, & 12 are also very well composed.

I'll be in China in Sept.  Too bad I can't make it to Thailand.

May 24 13 11:02 pm Link

Photographer

Motordrive Photography

Posts: 3090

Lodi, California, US

very good, both from quality and variety

May 24 13 11:17 pm Link

Model

Arya-Tara

Posts: 199

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Thank all for very appreciate commentary, Arya T.

May 27 13 12:12 am Link