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Photographer

Solus

Posts: 250

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

May 26 13 02:58 am Link

Photographer

Refrain Photography

Posts: 32

Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada

I love how just the slightest bit of light is catching the tip of the nipple between your fingers.

Overall...this is a great shot smile

May 27 13 10:58 am Link

Photographer

Solus

Posts: 250

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

Refrain Photography wrote:
I love how just the slightest bit of light is catching the tip of the nipple between your fingers.

Overall...this is a great shot smile

Thanks for feeding back, much appreciated Sir.

May 28 13 09:57 pm Link

Photographer

C h a r l e s D

Posts: 9307

Los Angeles, California, US

A heavy crop is in order for this shot to be more successful and salable.  Crop up from the bottom to her elbow, and crop in from the left to her hand.  That's your shot here.

If you must keep the rest, at least crop in from the left to her hand.  The dark negative space isn't helping the composition here at all.

Very nice lighting, nice everything else.  Just crop it.  Composition is off.

Jun 02 13 01:18 pm Link

Photographer

Solus

Posts: 250

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

Thanks Charles, I will have a look at your crop suggestion, much appreciated.

Jun 03 13 10:09 pm Link

Photographer

WCR3

Posts: 1240

Houston, Texas, US

Please do something about the bumps/pimples/blemishes just below the collar bone. They're extremely distracting, to the extent that they drew my eye away from the nipple. A few seconds with the spot healing brush is all you need.

Jun 05 13 01:53 pm Link