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Oakland, California, US

Senryū (川柳?, literally 'river willow') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer total morae (or "on", often translated as syllables, but see the article on onji for distinctions). Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious.

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E X P O S E D

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New York, New York, US

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Oakland, California, US

E X P O S E D wrote:
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quickly overlooked
if inattentive- careful:
intimate glimpses

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Dimitrius C

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Gary, Indiana, US

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Oakland, California, US

Dimitrius C wrote:
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cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

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Axioma

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Gent, East Flanders, Belgium

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Oakland, California, US

Axioma wrote:
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mist mutes vision too
distances obscured, in a
silence of mist: still

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2570

Los Angeles, California, US

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TDSImages

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Salt Lake City, Utah, US

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MatureModelMM

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Detroit, Michigan, US

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I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!

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Sarah_Bird

Posts: 292

Merrick, New York, US

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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile

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Oakland, California, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
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designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Jun 01 13 09:31 pm Link

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Light Writer

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Oakland, California, US

TDSImages wrote:
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hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Jun 01 13 09:33 pm Link

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MatureModelMM wrote:
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I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!

I did this before
though in the dim past, a search
may recall, I can't

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Sarah_Bird wrote:
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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile

the sweet time between
youth and age, hold on, before
the joy of play's lost

Jun 01 13 09:36 pm Link

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Jahanara

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Washington, District of Columbia, US

I'd like one!

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Jun 01 13 09:41 pm Link

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Oakland, California, US

Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:
I'd like one!

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fire in the forest
dead of winter, longing for
imagined delight

Jun 01 13 10:22 pm Link

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2570

Los Angeles, California, US

Light Writer wrote:

designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Very nice! Thank you!

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MelissaAnn

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Seattle, Washington, US

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Tuesday Hanson

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Bellingham, Washington, US

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Light Writer

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Oakland, California, US

MelissaAnn  wrote:
How about this one?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32755519 (18+)

desert plant reaching
defying the earth, stone calls-
escape the gray sky

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Black_Silk wrote:
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http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31029163

perpetual light,
a myth of romantics- death
perpetual myth

Jun 03 13 07:04 am Link

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Oakland, California, US

Tuesday Hanson wrote:
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(:

satire of sunset
political comment in
ironic cross stars

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Tuesday Hanson

Posts: 32

Bellingham, Washington, US

Thank you!

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The Dark Side

Posts: 309

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Light Writer wrote:

hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Beautiful...thank you!!

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Dimitrius C

Posts: 236

Gary, Indiana, US

Light Writer wrote:

cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

I love it smile

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Marciia Gringe

Posts: 390

Lloydminster, Alberta, Canada

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Vampire Jessie

Posts: 2131

Branson, Missouri, US

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Avatar Shots

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Los Angeles, California, US

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Oakland, California, US

Marciia Gringe wrote:
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power games with she
whose unlimited trust frees-
choosing to submit

Jun 30 13 07:45 pm Link

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Oakland, California, US

Vampire Jessie wrote:
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clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

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Oakland, California, US

Avatar Shots wrote:
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bright eyes glistening,
strong posture, confident smile
belie nervous hands

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Oakland, California, US

Acanthus Tattoos wrote:
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shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

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EdwardKristopher

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Tempe, Arizona, US

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Acanthus Tattoos

Posts: 432

Union, New Jersey, US

Light Writer wrote:

shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

thanks!

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Vampire Jessie

Posts: 2131

Branson, Missouri, US

Light Writer wrote:

clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

Love it smile

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EdwardKristopher wrote:
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sharp needle painting
modern iconography
in tender places

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