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Senryū (川柳?, literally 'river willow') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer total morae (or "on", often translated as syllables, but see the article on onji for distinctions). Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious.

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E X P O S E D

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New York, New York, US

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

E X P O S E D wrote:
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quickly overlooked
if inattentive- careful:
intimate glimpses

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Dimitrius C

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Gary, Indiana, US

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Dimitrius C wrote:
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cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

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Axioma

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Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

Axioma wrote:
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mist mutes vision too
distances obscured, in a
silence of mist: still

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Jorge Kreimer

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San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

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TDSImages

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Salt Lake City, Utah, US

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MatureModelMM

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Detroit, Michigan, US

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I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!

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Sarah_Bird

Posts: 293

Merrick, New York, US

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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
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designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Jun 01 13 09:31 pm Link

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TDSImages wrote:
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hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Jun 01 13 09:33 pm Link

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MatureModelMM wrote:
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I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!

I did this before
though in the dim past, a search
may recall, I can't

Jun 01 13 09:35 pm Link

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Sarah_Bird wrote:
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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile

the sweet time between
youth and age, hold on, before
the joy of play's lost

Jun 01 13 09:36 pm Link

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Jahanara

Posts: 124

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I'd like one!

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Jun 01 13 09:41 pm Link

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:
I'd like one!

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fire in the forest
dead of winter, longing for
imagined delight

Jun 01 13 10:22 pm Link

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Light Writer wrote:

designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Very nice! Thank you!

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MelissaAnn

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Seattle, Washington, US

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BlackSilkMagick

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California, Maryland, US

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Tuesday Hanson

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Bellingham, Washington, US

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

MelissaAnn  wrote:
How about this one?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32755519 (18+)

desert plant reaching
defying the earth, stone calls-
escape the gray sky

Jun 03 13 06:59 am Link

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Black_Silk wrote:
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https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31029163

perpetual light,
a myth of romantics- death
perpetual myth

Jun 03 13 07:04 am Link

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Tuesday Hanson wrote:
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(:

satire of sunset
political comment in
ironic cross stars

Jun 03 13 07:06 am Link

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Tuesday Hanson

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Bellingham, Washington, US

Thank you!

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The Dark Side

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Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Light Writer wrote:

hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Beautiful...thank you!!

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Dimitrius C

Posts: 236

Gary, Indiana, US

Light Writer wrote:

cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

I love it smile

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Marciia Gringe

Posts: 390

Lloydminster, Alberta, Canada

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Vampire Jessie

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Eureka Springs, Arkansas, US

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The Perfect Image

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Los Angeles, California, US

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

Marciia Gringe wrote:
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power games with she
whose unlimited trust frees-
choosing to submit

Jun 30 13 07:45 pm Link

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Light Writer

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Phoenix, Arizona, US

Vampire Jessie wrote:
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clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

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Avatar Shots wrote:
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bright eyes glistening,
strong posture, confident smile
belie nervous hands

Jun 30 13 07:51 pm Link

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Acanthus Tattoos wrote:
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shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

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EdwardKristopher

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Tempe, Arizona, US

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Acanthus Tattoos

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Union, New Jersey, US

Light Writer wrote:

shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

thanks!

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Vampire Jessie

Posts: 2142

Eureka Springs, Arkansas, US

Light Writer wrote:

clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

Love it smile

Jul 02 13 03:27 pm Link

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EdwardKristopher wrote:
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sharp needle painting
modern iconography
in tender places

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