Photographer

Kyle Payne Imaging

Posts: 3

San Diego, California, US

Hey all would love some Critiques

Jun 08 13 01:50 pm Link

Photographer

Marin Photography NYC

Posts: 7248

New York, New York, US

Not really much to pick on really.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130602/22/51ac2c5fbc5e1_m.jpg  The skin is a little too perfect. Aside from that, I think you are off to a good start anyway...

Jun 08 13 02:00 pm Link

Model

Marissa St Claire

Posts: 98

Eugene, Oregon, US

Perhaps you could give a little more information about yourself or your goals in your bio - it seems very uninformative.

As for your actual work - get more of it. The pictures are alright, perhaps do a little bit less post-editing. They all seem over done to me. Otherwise, your portfolio doesn't really make sense. The style of photography you are going for is very unclear and you don't have enough of any one genre to really see how good you are.

Jun 08 13 02:13 pm Link