Forums > Critique > Which one of your pics should go ? And why...

Model

Paige Morgan

Posts: 4058

New York, New York, US

Sure, I'll play

Jul 02 13 10:29 am Link

Model

Toria Pardoe

Posts: 113

Stoke-on-Trent, England, United Kingdom

I'd love to hear what you think!


As for your port, I'm not sure about this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/10/4e246ff0e6268_m.jpg

It's good, but I don't think it's as great as the others.

My favourite though, is this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120112/09/4f0f1779226ca_m.jpg

I think it's absolutely fantastic, it really caught my eye.

Aside from that, maybe make your 'about me' section a bit more concise, or maybe space it out a bit more.

Jul 02 13 10:42 am Link

Model

Samantha Ashley Mathias

Posts: 59

Tampa, Florida, US

Jamina Wittke wrote:

Sorry I can tell you like this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33061311
But its not up to par on a professional level with your others... the pose is okay and the lighting is a bit bright and the quality of the shot is also not great.
Mayebe this too... looks like its been taken on a phone
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29197770
and this one is just not as good as the other one like that plus you have a lot in that outfit!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27762965

This should definately be your avi!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29272908 amazing photo your eyes are gorgeous and your hair is super cool very fashion.

Thank you! I agree, and with the avi selection..is one of my favorites, I usually get asked if that is my hair color now. I try to stick with updated photos of myself, esp hair since I was hair model..trying to grow it out and not color it anymore. xD But thank you for the insight!

Jul 02 13 12:29 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Me?

Jul 02 13 12:39 pm Link

Photographer

Maria J Campos

Posts: 252

Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

Jamina Wittke wrote:

This is just not up to par with your other work.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29591608

There's a great contrast between the Red dress and green moss and tree and it really works but I think there could have been a better pose, it seems a little amateur compared to the rest of your pictures? Maybe you have some more from the same shoot?

The best!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26270323

I just F*cking love this so bloody much. The trees int he backgorund are beautiful the colours are amazing and the models hair goes so well with the sand and its just wonderful... amazing!

And how can you post a picture I it always sounds so bloody difficult...

Thanks!!
To post an image copy the url of the image, then paste between [ img ][ / img ] without the spaces.

Jul 02 13 01:51 pm Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Camabs wrote:
yes please smile

edit:
as for your port. It is pretty good already, showing your versatility and ability to pose and create facial expressions. If I would have to remove one, it would be:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/14/51cca921b8e79_m.jpg

Not because it is a bad picture, it just doesn't add that much to your pf imho.

You may want to add a few portraits and/or outdoor shots if you have ones that are of similar quality as the rest of your pf.

Definately should be your avatar!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31931237

Get rid of this, its not particularly bad its just not up to scratch the lighting is too bright and her waist disappears into the light so she ha no shape

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24642896

Jul 06 13 12:37 pm Link

Photographer

Liam Dean Photography

Posts: 50

Walker, Michigan, US

I'll bite.

Jul 06 13 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 7777

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I gotta know..

Jul 06 13 12:58 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 760

Miami, Florida, US

I need to get rid of the new ones I know...What say you  smile

Jul 06 13 03:31 pm Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

OK tell me

Jul 06 13 06:11 pm Link

Photographer

Lorna Jane Newman

Posts: 15

London, England, United Kingdom

Jul 06 13 06:24 pm Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Me pls..

Jul 06 13 06:32 pm Link

Photographer

JoshuaDavisPhotography

Posts: 2430

San Francisco, California, US

Let me know.

As far as you, I'd remove this one:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/10/4e246ff0e6268_m.jpg

You've got much better headshots in your portfolio.

Jul 06 13 06:38 pm Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 465

Anderson, Indiana, US

Opinions vary. Personally this is my favorite from your port. I think it shows your muscle tone better than the other pics. I like your hair in this one too.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/14/51cca921b8e79_m.jpg

Jul 06 13 06:55 pm Link

Model

Ruth Gray

Posts: 53

Portland, Maine, US

I'd love to hear your thoughts. Thanks!

Jul 07 13 10:08 pm Link

Model

Aimee LaSourire

Posts: 41

Heilbronn, Baden-Württemberg, Germany

I would appreciate your opinion thanks in forward smile

to you: I absolutely love your look!!!
And I would say as you don't have that many pics in your port you shouldn't remove any cause they are all different and colorful of expression and poses smile
I jus noticed on your page your text of introduction is quite big. Not in content that is great too but maybe people would be more motivated to read it completely if you had some breaks between paragraphs here and then, just a suggestion.

As for me I stay having too many pics in my port please help! wink

Jul 07 13 10:22 pm Link

Photographer

SYCF

Posts: 276

Los Angeles, California, US

I need to eliminate!

Jul 07 13 10:33 pm Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Me pls smile

Jul 08 13 12:03 am Link

Photographer

Mortonovich

Posts: 5556

San Diego, California, US

Let fly.

Jul 08 13 12:08 am Link

Model

Raven Blake

Posts: 58

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Would love to hear from you smile

Jul 08 13 04:10 pm Link

Model

Rhiannon Carreira

Posts: 5

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

moi aussi xx

Jul 09 13 01:02 am Link

Model

MarNOudt

Posts: 3

Las Flores, California, US

Can you please tell me? Thank you

Jul 09 13 01:19 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

narie wrote:
Would like to know your opinion! I'm bad at reviewing my own port..

For your port I'd get rid of this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/14/51cca921b8e79_m.jpg

It's not a particularly bad photo, but it doesn't show any posing ability like the rest of your port

Get rid of this, its not bad its just not as 'interesting' as your others if you get me? I think the other one promotes your ability for catalogue ect enough, its not bad thought your beautiful, just might as well get rid its not 'adding' anything to your port, just taking up a bit of space...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32668350

This for me is your best!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32253170
So so beautiful, very soft and totally enhances your beautiful face structure! This is a very very good shot!
And thank you for your advice smile

Jul 10 13 06:20 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

L Raye wrote:
Which are they?

Very interesting range of images and beautiful port!
This for me stands out as a little pointless
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32869950

This is my favorite, amazing model, the way her arm curves around the tree is very beautiful and it looks very professional, the lighting is perfect well done !
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18547870

Jul 10 13 06:26 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Adam J Caldwell wrote:
Yesmmm please

And I have nothing to add that hasn't already been said above.

Shout me when you are in Manchesterrrr =]

This can go for me,
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32969891
I think this one is just so more magnificent, I have saved it on my Laptop because I thought it was that good and I could maybe re-create it! I think the other pictures just takes away from the other one of the same shoot?
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32898656
This is just soooooo, sooooooooooo amazing, I cannot describe, absolute perfection! The location is great the lighting is great the model is AMAZING and her hair is falling perfect and her foot is in a perfect position ... just wow!
And I definitely will!

Jul 10 13 06:32 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

DRaskin Photography wrote:
If you're still going at this, I'd love to hear your opinions.

As far as review of your port, it looks like you already cut the pic that others were saying wasn't flattering. The only other thing I can say, is I'd possibly edit down your "about me" section, or section it off into paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.

Thanks I've since changed my profile section a little smile .

This for me can go,
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32410403
Its just a little bit boring compared to your others, they all tell a story and I don't feel like this one does? Maybe alter the crop or make it a headshot? because her face is beautiful, I am not sure wether its the pose or the position of the dress... hmmm

I loooove this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33193253
Its beautiful, and the sun behind is amazing! The pose is great and its just a fantastic picture well done!

Jul 10 13 06:38 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Paige Morgan wrote:
Sure, I'll play

This is just amazing and I am finding it difficult to cut one! The only thing I could say is I wish in this amazing photograph there was a hint of more light on the right hand side but that's the photographer! Awesome pose!

Its incredible!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30940088

well done great model!

Jul 10 13 06:46 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Toria Pardoe wrote:
I'd love to hear what you think!


As for your port, I'm not sure about this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110718/10/4e246ff0e6268_m.jpg

It's good, but I don't think it's as great as the others.

My favourite though, is this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120112/09/4f0f1779226ca_m.jpg

I think it's absolutely fantastic, it really caught my eye.

Aside from that, maybe make your 'about me' section a bit more concise, or maybe space it out a bit more.

Hey thanks for your feedback!
I would suggest cutting your bottom three images, they don't do anything but linger there and you have definitely moved on from that on a professional ladder.
Your port is fun and interesting, but as for your first four, maybe choose two? Id suggest keeping your avatar and this one

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33131682
I love the shape you have created well done !

Jul 10 13 06:50 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

winking_wonder wrote:
Me?

Love this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32729607
Love the clothes and your facial expressiona nd the grass to the side works beautifully!
Cut this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27772280
I'm not keen on the facial expression and the lighting its just not as good as the others! smile

Jul 10 13 06:54 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Liam Dean Photography wrote:
I'll bite.

This is AMAZING
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31186756
Very jealous! Beautiful llama! Great pose

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20650448
this can go it just doesn't really fit in for me...

Jul 10 13 06:57 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Images by MR wrote:
I gotta know..

This is my favorite!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29852490
Very beautiful model amazing pose and great capture Love everything about it!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29263211
Really don't like this models expression the pose is perfect and the location is great but the expression just anti climaxes it for me...

Jul 10 13 07:02 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
I need to get rid of the new ones I know...What say you  smile

This is beyond beautiful.... I am so jealous right now! just wow!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19762663

Get rid of this... its just not as good as the other one in that orange bikini so it takes the other ones shine away a little!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27702219

Jul 10 13 07:07 am Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 50

Carlisle, England, United Kingdom

Lorna Jane Newman wrote:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33141753

This can go, its not up to par with your current work as something like this is just in a different league! this is amazing!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33141712
beautiful capture amazing model! And cool concept!

Jul 10 13 07:11 am Link

Photographer

Pieter Vandeur

Posts: 1312

Brussels, Brussels, Belgium

I definitely need to start cutting in my portfolio...  Would love to hear your opinion!


This is your worst imho:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110904/09/4e63ab296a747_m.jpg
Not really liking the pose, styling, make-up. Just not working for me...

Jul 10 13 07:28 am Link

Photographer

Square Jaw Photography

Posts: 364

Odenton, Maryland, US

Open fire!

Jul 10 13 07:48 am Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 7777

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Jamina Wittke wrote:

This is my favorite!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29852490
Very beautiful model amazing pose and great capture Love everything about it!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29263211
Really don't like this models expression the pose is perfect and the location is great but the expression just anti climaxes it for me...

Thank you

Jul 10 13 11:41 pm Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

You skipped me sad

Jul 11 13 03:50 am Link

Photographer

Keith Aleksoff

Posts: 46

Anchorage, Alaska, US

Please do

Jul 11 13 07:50 pm Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

bump

Jul 14 13 07:22 pm Link