Forums > Digital Art and Retouching > DAR Critiques > first split freq retouch

Retoucher

jl-graphism

Posts: 43

Paris, Île-de-France, France

hi, i need some critiques and advices for my training.

here it is :
original
http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/905/screenshot20130603at910.png

retouched
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/189/0/2/retouch_by_supermouss-d6cl6lg.png

Jul 08 13 04:21 pm Link

Retoucher

Georgina Olivia Milford

Posts: 41

Windsor, Connecticut, US

i like it.

Jul 11 13 06:26 am Link

Retoucher

Retouch007

Posts: 403

East Newark, New Jersey, US

skin looks a bit blurred don't try to use the color layer too much. try to do use d&b more and more but of course don't abandon the healing and cloning. Try a harder image instead.

Jul 13 13 05:12 pm Link

Photographer

oivie

Posts: 32

Leeds, England, United Kingdom

Looks a bit too blurry and dirty, you might need add some texture on skin.

Jul 20 13 08:46 am Link

Retoucher

LarrySparks Photography

Posts: 116

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Needs some more skin texture, I know you can do it smile

Aug 07 13 02:45 am Link