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Model

Nicole-Alexander

Posts: 95

Riverton, New Jersey, US

I'm updating my page since I haven't been here in a while-- I've done a few great shoots since I've last been here and want to replace some old photos with new ones. What are the weakest photos on my port here?

Jul 13 13 08:04 am Link

Photographer

Aaron Lewis Photography

Posts: 5083

Catskill, New York, US

Either this or your avitar. Neither of them work for me. You have much more powerful images in your port.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120401/19/4f7912e0c8324_m.jpg

Jul 13 13 08:20 am Link

Photographer

ClaytonM

Posts: 3

Eastern Passage, Nova Scotia, Canada

I think this is your weakest.  It shows definition in your eyes but not much else.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120226/20/4f4b06595aa17_m.jpg

I like the one directly after it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120303/16/4f52b4dbaf2a1_m.jpg

Jul 13 13 09:14 am Link

Photographer

MidTNPhotographer

Posts: 68

Murfreesboro, Tennessee, US

I think you have a really good portfolio with many outstanding images.  I think the one taken underneath the waterfall is perhaps your weakest.  The lighting isn't very flattering nor your facial expression in this particular shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120303/16/4f52b44290f02_m.jpg

Jul 13 13 09:21 am Link

Photographer

J O H N A L L A N

Posts: 10313

Santa Ana, California, US

I'd say this one, you can't really see your body or your face and it's got a photographer's big obnoxious logo stamped across it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101128/08/4cf28415cbec8_m.jpg

Jul 13 13 12:21 pm Link

Model

Nicole-Alexander

Posts: 95

Riverton, New Jersey, US

Thanks for the critique! I'll consider your comments.

Jul 13 13 12:57 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

J O H N  A L L A N wrote:
I'd say this one, you can't really see your body or your face and it's got a photographer's big obnoxious logo stamped across it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101128/08/4cf28415cbec8_m.jpg

+1

Jul 13 13 12:59 pm Link

Photographer

Eralar

Posts: 1778

Sherbrooke, Quebec, Canada

If I may add, this picture, as was said, is probably your best. But also, due to high contrast with background and you, it's also the one that jumps the most to the eye. I believe it would make an excellent Avatar.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120303/16/4f52b4dbaf2a1_m.jpg

Jul 14 13 06:22 am Link