Forums > Critique > Opinion on New Avatar

Model

Lindsay Leiser

Posts: 8

Roseville, California, US

First image from ShutterKat 'Grunge' shoot for my avatar. What do you think?

Jul 15 13 07:34 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4501

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

you have better in your portfolio already.  I don't like the lack of separation of your body (black wardrobe) and background (also black) in this photo and the photo as a whole is unremarkable.

Jul 15 13 07:40 am Link

Photographer

varton

Posts: 2363

New York, New York, US

Lindsay Ashabran wrote:
First image from ShutterKat 'Grunge' shoot for my avatar. What do you think?

I prefer this one
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130527/13/51a3c830c8c66_m.jpg

Jul 15 13 07:50 am Link

Photographer

roger alan

Posts: 464

Anderson, Indiana, US

I agree with the two posts before this one.

I also like this pic:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130524/11/519faf5f357e0_m.jpg

Jul 15 13 11:22 am Link

Photographer

The Effective Image

Posts: 3943

Lansing, Michigan, US

Jul 15 13 10:17 pm Link

Photographer

MFS Modelphilia

Posts: 402

Hilo, Hawaii, US

While the lack of black separation is a problem, an even bigger one is that you are all bent over and scrunched up on yourself so that, along with the blackness, you are just a formless black blob in the frame.

Jul 15 13 11:29 pm Link