Retoucher

Alena_retouch

Posts: 66

Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia

http://s5.uploads.ru/49Gsj.gif
http://s4.uploads.ru/nZNTQ.jpg
Photogrpaphy: Stéfan Bourson
Retouching: Alena Zolotnikova

Sep 06 13 02:36 pm Link

Digital Artist

RixDigital

Posts: 159

Crystal Lake, Illinois, US

Very impressive! I like that you used a bit of randomness so as not the have duplicated patterns (at least I couldn't find any).

However, the hair definitely still has a painted look.  Perhaps it's because I'm viewing a smaller version of the image.  How does the original look?

I know some of the tips I've gotten when painting on hair is to both blur and add noise to match other areas of the image.

Sep 06 13 04:36 pm Link

Retoucher

Mateusz Musielak

Posts: 37

Wrocław, Dolnośląskie, Poland

I guess you love to draw wink

Sep 08 13 06:20 am Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

Color is good. Contrast is very good.

Local details on her face are completely lost, hair is way to blurry and lips need work.

Overall this isn't bad, but you should only fix what needs to be fixed. You're great at making image pop.

Sep 18 13 05:58 am Link

Retoucher

Gasser Murda

Posts: 122

Cairo, Cairo, Egypt

how you did hair looks like that ? could you tell me plzz?

Sep 27 13 06:41 pm Link

Retoucher

THESebastianReuter

Posts: 4

Frankfurt, Hassia, Germany

hair looks very fake to me... I don't like it...

Oct 05 13 01:36 am Link

Retoucher

The Invisible Touch

Posts: 717

Tarragona, Catalonia, Spain

Not sure what was what you were looking to achieve, I think is really impressive the hair you have drawn but to be honest there is nothing realistic about this image. It is closer to illustration than retouching. Maybe you should consider the first... :-)

If you look at magazines, there is nothing like this.. far too overdone for me.

:-)

Oct 08 13 03:08 pm Link

Retoucher

Mike Needham Retouching

Posts: 369

Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom

It is an impressive feat of drawing, but does contain a little hint of Mills & Boon cover. It's a tough call how far to go, but perhaps this time it's just a little over for a 'normal' retouch.

Oct 09 13 01:17 pm Link