Forums > Critique > Critique my port Please!!!!!!

Model

Erica Ross

Posts: 9

Lancaster, California, US

So basically getting back into modeling and I have a shot coming up. I would love for somebody to look at my past work and give me some tips on what I can do better. Dont hold back on the critique please!!!

Sep 12 13 09:59 pm Link

Photographer

Lee K

Posts: 2411

Palatine, Illinois, US

Honestly? 

It's... so bad.

Your goal should be to delete everything you have.  I mean really, when have you looked in a respectable magazine and seen anything like what you have?

There's your answer.   smile

Sep 12 13 10:06 pm Link

guide forum

Model

Rockabella

Posts: 588

New York, New York, US

Too many pictures of the same pose with your hands on your head. Also, the photoshop effects are really devaluing your images. Work with skilled photographers and don't be afraid to get experimental on shoots.

Best:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111122/22/4ecc98247db38_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110512/20/4dcca871839d4_m.jpg

Sep 12 13 10:15 pm Link

Model

Erica Ross

Posts: 9

Lancaster, California, US

thank you guys for your honesty smile

Sep 12 13 10:34 pm Link

Model

sasweets

Posts: 404

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

You don't look confident in any of your photos. You just look unsure. So I'd practice on that.

Sep 13 13 04:32 am Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

All three images badly need some fill light. The two images of you in shorts and tank top are intriguing but profoundly frustrating. It's a good look for you, but your face almost disappears into the shadow.

Sep 13 13 06:05 am Link

Model

Erica Ross

Posts: 9

Lancaster, California, US

sasweets wrote:
You don't look confident in any of your photos. You just look unsure. So I'd practice on that.

Ok i will thank you for your input

Sep 13 13 12:54 pm Link

Model

Erica Ross

Posts: 9

Lancaster, California, US

s c i a t h wrote:
Too many pictures of the same pose with your hands on your head. Also, the photoshop effects are really devaluing your images. Work with skilled photographers and don't be afraid to get experimental on shoots.

Best:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111122/22/4ecc98247db38_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110512/20/4dcca871839d4_m.jpg

Ok thank you, I will try my best!

Sep 13 13 12:55 pm Link