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Model

Just-Jade

Posts: 11

Norwich, England, United Kingdom

Hey people smile I have uploaded some new photos. Please could you tell me what you think to my portfolio please. Many thanks x

Sep 16 13 11:23 am Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5210

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

Just-Jade wrote:
Hey people smile I have uploaded some new photos. Please could you tell me what you think to my portfolio please. Many thanks x

I think you are rather beautiful. I like your portfolio and yet there is something 'missing'.

I can't really put my finger on it but it feels like you have much more to give; that you have much more than these photos are showing.

You need something in there that's slicker, glossier, more 'front cover'.

I know that's not really helpful... sorry. smile

Jade - Serious Critique can be a bit of a back water - if you don't get any more responses try posting this in the 'Critique Forum'.

Sep 17 13 02:54 am Link

Model

Just-Jade

Posts: 11

Norwich, England, United Kingdom

Thank you Drew! I know thats what I feel..something missing! smile

Sep 17 13 08:46 am Link