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Model

Melanie Rose Kazmercyk

Posts: 46

New York, New York, US

I'm going to print more photos to add to my portfolio, please pick the strongest 1-3 favorites from each of the sets below - I need some outsiders opinions. they all should have numbers for easy listing

Wedding Editorial
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22517982@N … 585077012/

Christina Kwon
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22517982@N … 585308361/

Central Park
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22517982@N … 585465116/

Thanks, can't wait to hear your opinions!!!!!!

Sep 17 13 06:46 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4502

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

largeweb_1
Kwon_9
Andrea_1

Sep 17 13 12:44 pm Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

That wedding set would be great, if there weren't cheesy moments liek  tilted frame??? Looking at a cupcake looking posed and fake? What's with that.

That last one, model should never ever be allowed to jump around like a monkey. Jumping is reserved for highly experienced models. I've had situations myself when girls who know nothing about posing, yet are full of energy, start doing craziest things. I do not click the shutter. There are some things that define fashion. Like presenting the clothes.

Style is the right measure of things.

Sep 18 13 06:31 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photography NYC

Posts: 7249

New York, New York, US

I like the first one of the wedding editorial.

The second set by Kwon, they are all very good but very catalog like to me. Not necessarily a bad thing but it's just not very exciting to me.

The third set if the images were cropped better I would be more receptive to them because of the natural settings.

Not an expert, just my take on it......

Sep 18 13 06:47 am Link

Photographer

Jayc Yu

Posts: 526

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

The wedding looks best with an actual set. Skin renders well, though a little underexposed.
The school teacher set is brand, but has some nice wardrobes.
You look eloquently tall in the park set, and the location is also good, though he could have capitalize the background more.

Sep 18 13 12:41 pm Link

Photographer

Mark

Posts: 2893

New York, New York, US

These are all pretty bad pictures- just soo amateurish on your end and photographer.  The wedding pics- thought brides were generally happy on that day these pics look like  your husband was just killed- the sullen look, morbid make up etc

Andrea 17 isnt too bad from Central Park but in the others you are so determined to pose and they all look silly and exaggerated

The other series is bad - the clothes are awful, they are way too big for you and the set is bland.  They look very unappealing

Oct 06 13 10:14 pm Link