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Model

Moni Ann

Posts: 2

Dallas, Texas, US

Hey guys I'm new to MM and only have a couple of shoots under my belt. Feel free to check out my pictures and leave comments and suggestions!

Thank you

Sep 17 13 09:34 am Link

Photographer

Richard Majerski

Posts: 438

East Hartford, Connecticut, US

Think you need to work with better photographers and get some more experience at different stylings.However your look,figure and style says to me you are perfect for glamour/pinup/clubwear/swimwear/lingerie kind of a sexy vixen vibe there.Just my opinion that is where your money will be made-not high fashion.

Sep 17 13 02:30 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 32233

Lodi, California, US

You're lovely, but some of those images simply aren't portfolio-worthy.

This is by far your best image but your skin is overprocessed.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/22/52314ef6ce278_m.jpg

Another otherwise usable image, but the overprocessing on the skin into a plastic texture and the brownish tone of the overall image diminish its value in a model's portfolio, IMO.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130909/17/522e6446d257c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130905/18/522933784b0f8_m.jpg
Borderline usable, but the left eye sunken into makeup or shadow is a problem.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130917/02/52381be0b51cc_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130905/18/522932e5b6962_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130917/02/52381bc253363_m.jpg
Terrible images that don't belong in anyone's portfolio. That third image is almost usable, but there's something really bad going on with the face (makeup? lighting? postprocessing?) Beautiful skin on the hip, but the face is scary.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/22/52314f4022420_m.jpg
and
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33812890 18+
These are both images more suited to a photographer's portfolio, but they're pretty useless for a model's portfolio.

For a start, it's not a particularly bad start, but you should get more shoots with other photographers to replace most of these images ASAP.

Sep 17 13 04:36 pm Link