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Retoucher

FantasyArt

Posts: 137

Deva, Hunedoara, Romania

Any critique is appreciated smile Thank you very much!

http://i44.tinypic.com/fcsodt.jpg

Sep 19 13 12:31 pm Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

Cheeks are way to smooth, but it's not a bad retouch by any mean. However, if you had up to the waist or full body image, and did this kind of shaping, it would be looking quite odd. Retain the expression and bone structure.

Sep 20 13 12:19 am Link

Retoucher

Whitney Minthorn

Posts: 83

Pendleton, Oregon, US

Looks beautiful!! From the nose down, looks a little unnaturally long (even though it is natural).
Some saturation issues in the left cheek, and a bit too sharp in some areas such as sides of nose.  A+ on everything else! smile

Sep 21 13 12:35 am Link

Retoucher

Ledo retouch

Posts: 1156

Lodi, California, US

I like it, but would like to see some more life in the eye

Sep 22 13 12:28 pm Link

Photographer

Camerosity

Posts: 5316

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Very nice work. As someone mentioned, I'd like to see the irises lightened and a catchlight in the eye. And on high-end work like this, I'd like to see the eyelashes thickened with a few more lashes at the left.

Sep 22 13 12:49 pm Link

Photographer

Camerosity

Posts: 5316

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Camerosity wrote:
Very nice work. As someone mentioned, I'd like to see the irises lightened and a catchlight in the eye. And on high-end work like this, I'd like to see the eyelashes thickened with a few more lashes at the left and a bit of trimming on the lashes in that area.

Sep 22 13 12:50 pm Link