Retoucher

Roman Zverev

Posts: 49

Irkutsk, Irkutsk, Russia

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71758621/crit.jpg

this work just for practice. But I need some constructive ..
Interesting general impression, and technical moments.

thx.

Sep 27 13 02:00 pm Link

Retoucher

Whitney Minthorn

Posts: 90

Pendleton, Oregon, US

VERY very beautiful and well done! 
I would correct the tones of the hand in the bottom right with the rest of her body.  Teeth seem to have a lot of dark shadows.

Sep 27 13 04:49 pm Link

Photographer

Richard Pommerat

Posts: 6

Paris, Île-de-France, France

nicely done but perhaps can you do a better job with the stray hairs especially on the top. And also perhaps fix the right eyebrow.

But all around, pretty nice!

Oct 01 13 12:55 am Link

Photographer

Camerosity

Posts: 5360

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Nice skin texture. I would adjust the hue of the neck and check to match the face. Also there is a gap in the hairline directly above the model's right eye (camera left). I would clone or patch in some hair to close the gap in the hairline. The whites of the model's eyes are slightly blue.

Oct 01 13 01:11 am Link

Retoucher

Mike Needham Retouching

Posts: 369

Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom

http://i43.tinypic.com/9ss3v5.jpg

Oct 01 13 06:19 am Link

Photographer

Andy Shrestha

Posts: 21

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Mike Needham Retouching wrote:
http://i43.tinypic.com/9ss3v5.jpg

thank you. even we are learning seeing this.

Oct 01 13 04:09 pm Link

Photographer

Jakov Markovic

Posts: 1128

Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia

Also, you Dnb everything with a very soft brush causing everything to be soft. Use both hard and soft brushes, if it means using a smaller brush use it.

Oct 09 13 03:43 pm Link