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Model

John Kish

Posts: 33

Bend, Oregon, US

I'll tell you my opinion of which I think should stay and go in your port. I'm an inspiring model and working photographer- So Please return the favor to my new port. Thanks! Lets go.

Oct 28 13 04:15 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

This should go. Doesn't do anything for your port.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120128/11/4f2452c73f5ef.jpg
I would add to the go column this one as well: https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131025/13/526ad6c65267f.jpg

Stay. Nice headshot:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130824/21/52198d3d179f9_m.jpg

All the best,

Jorge

Oct 28 13 05:04 pm Link

Model

John Kish

Posts: 33

Bend, Oregon, US

First off, I'm in LOVE with your port. SO amazing.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130218/21/51230c2bc11f8_m.jpg
Above is to Go, it just doesn't have much going on. It's a cute shot, but compared to your other work...nope.

STUNNING
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31865942

I think you're doin it right, this photo is so great and really stands out from your port.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31632466

I just feel like there's so much to look at in your portfolio! You should thin down!

Oct 28 13 06:14 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Thank you! I'm my own worst editor.

Oct 28 13 06:22 pm Link

Photographer

Beautiful Boudoir

Posts: 119

Quincy, Massachusetts, US

Oct 28 13 06:46 pm Link

Model

John Kish

Posts: 33

Bend, Oregon, US

Oct 28 13 06:51 pm Link

Model

Meghan Noelle

Posts: 115

Houston, Texas, US

Oct 28 13 09:20 pm Link

Model

Meghan Noelle

Posts: 115

Houston, Texas, US

also,

I love the idea of this but I feel that the background is very distracting

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26863633

I like this one because it shows great emotion (but I also wish there hadnt been people in the background)

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28713325

eye contact is very nice here as well

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33667796

Oct 28 13 09:25 pm Link

Model

John Kish

Posts: 33

Bend, Oregon, US

Oct 29 13 06:55 am Link

Photographer

EdwardKristopher

Posts: 3409

Tempe, Arizona, US

Let me know!

Oct 29 13 05:55 pm Link

Oct 30 13 07:20 am Link

Model

Jacky Francis

Posts: 21

London, Ontario, Canada

OK, here’s my two cents:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131025/13/526ad742373f2_m.jpg

An ok photo, but just don’t think it’s the strongest on in your portfolio: just the quality is a bit grainy and I’m not a fan of the lighting.



You have some very creative photos in your portfolio, but two that I absolutely love are these:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120128/11/4f2452c73f5ef_m.jpg
    - I’m always a fan of music-themed shots, but I’m particularly fond of the     uniqueness of this one with the headphone placement.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120128/11/4f2452d604066_m.jpg
    - A very creative shot and really shows your more artistic side.  Well done smile

And I look forward to getting your feedback on my best/worst (I always appreciate constructive criticism smile ).

Oct 30 13 12:55 pm Link

Model

John Kish

Posts: 33

Bend, Oregon, US

Jacky Francis wrote:
OK, here’s my two cents:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131025/13/526ad742373f2_m.jpg

An ok photo, but just don’t think it’s the strongest on in your portfolio: just the quality is a bit grainy and I’m not a fan of the lighting.



You have some very creative photos in your portfolio, but two that I absolutely love are these:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120128/11/4f2452c73f5ef_m.jpg
    - I’m always a fan of music-themed shots, but I’m particularly fond of the     uniqueness of this one with the headphone placement.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120128/11/4f2452d604066_m.jpg
    - A very creative shot and really shows your more artistic side.  Well done smile

And I look forward to getting your feedback on my best/worst (I always appreciate constructive criticism smile ).

Hey thanks for the in depth feedback! That's great to know smile

Your turn!

First off, you're stunning!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34236652
There's something about this one I like, kind of Lady Gaga-esc...sexy but tasteful!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34205175

Really cool shot with the lighting and colors and post editing smile

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33556291

^Really not a fan of this one. The whole 80's romantic glare is so outdated, and there isn't much connection with the camera. Plus we have no idea where we are in the photo due to the cropping so we don't know what you're experiencing!

Overall I think you have some talent, but kind of like me, we haven't gotten in front of the camera enough-or at least in front of good quality photographers. tongue Keep at it and have photographers take risks and shoot ya so your port can become stronger!

Oct 30 13 07:05 pm Link

Model

Brittani Harrell

Posts: 22

Dothan, Alabama, US

Hit me, always looking to spice up my port

Oct 30 13 08:21 pm Link

Model

KT Nicole

Posts: 66

Hastings, Minnesota, US

I definitely need an opinion on that cause I'm getting more pictures soon from a previous shoot.

Nov 07 13 10:08 am Link