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Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2393

Los Angeles, California, US

Shot this last night.

As always, curious about reactions.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34832069 18+

Jan 03 14 07:57 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 2694

Walnut Creek, California, US

Not the type of image I am fond of. But I am biased, so ignore that comment.

The eyes and mouth seem awkward.

But just one worthless opinion.    smile

Jan 03 14 01:27 pm Link

Model

Raychel Adams

Posts: 55

Detroit, Michigan, US

I like the simplicity of it. Nice lightening as well.

Jan 03 14 01:31 pm Link

Photographer

Moon Pix Photography

Posts: 3892

Syracuse, New York, US

I think the thing that bothers me most is her right butt cheek showing...

Jan 03 14 01:32 pm Link

Model

Jupiter Red

Posts: 521

New York, New York, US

Well I for one,
Love it

Jan 03 14 04:03 pm Link

Photographer

PTPhotoUT

Posts: 1961

Salt Lake City, Utah, US

Moon Pix Photography wrote:
I think the thing that bothers me most is her right butt cheek showing...

I kind of like that, but I did shoot one model whose biggest fear, when shooting nudes, was that a butt cheek might show through on a frontal shot. I did not understand her fear, but I did accommodate her.

Jan 03 14 04:14 pm Link

Photographer

Jeffrey M Fletcher

Posts: 4344

Asheville, North Carolina, US

Very nice. You've a minimalist style with a precise line that is stark and lovely. I like this image.

Jan 03 14 04:47 pm Link

Photographer

Postcards FT Wasteland

Posts: 963

Washington, District of Columbia, US

I like it. Has that fashion feel to it, and bold beauty with the nudity. Cool shot.

Jan 03 14 09:14 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 2393

Los Angeles, California, US

Thank you Raychel, Red, Jeffrey, and Postcards, for your very kind words.

It's very nice when someone "gets it".

Jan 04 14 01:03 am Link

Photographer

Drew Smith Photography

Posts: 5210

Nottingham, England, United Kingdom

Not to my personal liking. Doesn't mean it's bad, just not my taste in lighting, pose or model. Apart from that I think it's great. smile

Jan 04 14 02:00 am Link

Photographer

MesmerEyes Photography

Posts: 3021

Tyler, Texas, US

Drew Smith Photography wrote:
Not to my personal liking. Doesn't mean it's bad, just not my taste in lighting, pose or model. Apart from that I think it's great. smile

I have to agree with Drew on the lighting and pose.

Jan 04 14 02:28 am Link

Photographer

234329043249234

Posts: 212

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

if it was shot with a strobe would look better with different angles of lighting. ring flash becomes too repetitive. otherwise nice image

Jan 04 14 03:47 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 21387

Orlando, Florida, US

I'm enjoying your new images quite a bit, this one included, pushing the limits of photography into a more graphic realm is an interesting twist  .  .  .  almost has a Gustav Klimt surrealistic feel to it  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .

SOS

Jan 04 14 06:41 am Link

Photographer

DVP Photography

Posts: 2861

Broomfield, Colorado, US

You asked for reactions so here's mine.

I do see a trend these days towards this kind of minimalist graphic arts approach.  I think this can be fun to experiment with but don't overdo it cause you'll get sloppy with your lighting.

Personally I don't like this style.

Jan 04 14 04:30 pm Link

Photographer

Paul Ferris

Posts: 3508

New York, New York, US

Washed out lighting (I know thats what you were going for) and blah expression by the model. It has no pop.

Jan 04 14 04:36 pm Link

Photographer

Rik Williams

Posts: 3492

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I do like this one Jorge.

It's fashionable and almost statuesque in nature.

The way her eye's are cast down and outward gives her a sense of power, or rather, control over her environment imo.

A beautiful model candidly posed and presented in your hallmark style is a winner for mine ...and I personally couldn't care less about her butt cheek showing.

Jan 04 14 10:44 pm Link

Photographer

Light Echoes

Posts: 29

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

Pointless.

Jan 04 14 10:56 pm Link