Retoucher

Ledo retouch

Posts: 1184

Lodi, California, US

https://i823.photobucket.com/albums/zz156/mtrdrv/_DSC1378_small_zps11f10455.jpg
is there anything that needs closer scrutiny, or should be done differently ?

May 04 14 05:53 pm Link

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Tytaniafairy

Posts: 4520

Evansville, Indiana, US

It is good , the only one I have is her left arm towards her elbow , the green lit area , in that area there is not as much or no light , it looks more like paint instead of the green light coming off like in other areas and  the only thing I can think of is a personal opinion . with it being sort of fantasy , a different background would suit it better ...

May 05 14 10:40 am Link

Retoucher

Ledo retouch

Posts: 1184

Lodi, California, US

thank you, I see what you mean about her elbow, it was a smaller, and
a bit more bland green filtered flash on the side and I misjudged the
properties of light a little when I changed color and size.

I know what you mean about the background, I'm trying to emulate a
movie poster and left room for lots of text.

May 10 14 04:51 pm Link

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Tytaniafairy

Posts: 4520

Evansville, Indiana, US

Ledo retouch wrote:
thank you, I see what you mean about her elbow, it was a smaller, and
a bit more bland green filtered flash on the side and I misjudged the
properties of light a little when I changed color and size.

I know what you mean about the background, I'm trying to emulate a
movie poster and left room for lots of text.

Yes I can see that too . my misjudgment . the arm yes ,  it could had been the photo itself ...

May 10 14 09:21 pm Link