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Hi! A few of my last shoot with photographer Freek (#3104688) and MUAH Gaby Storck, when there was just a little bit of purple colour left outside. Of course I can only put one in my port. Which one do you like most?  1.  2.  3.  4.  5.  Thankyou! Nov 26 14 07:01 am Link You need to repost your links, you did something incorrectly. Nov 26 14 12:19 pm Link Lallure Photographic wrote: Thanks. Are they visible now? Nov 26 14 02:25 pm Link Yes. #4 Nov 26 14 02:32 pm Link #5 looks more natural than the others. Cheers Nov 26 14 02:33 pm Link YES! I gave you a full port review recently and commented on certain things that bothered me so it's nice to see that, in my opinion anyway, you are improving. And while I still think you need to work on what to do with your face more, in the first 2 images your bottom lip doesn't look as relaxed as it should, in the rest of them you look natural and I love the last one. You look great, the quality of the work is really nice, and the scenery goes with what you're wearing so good job I say! Nov 26 14 02:34 pm Link I like 4 and 5 but will go with number 4, great smile beautiful model You have really stepped your work up Wish you well Nov 26 14 05:24 pm Link Definitely #5. Others are good. #5 shines. Nov 26 14 05:28 pm Link #4 Nov 26 14 05:40 pm Link #4 Love it!! Nov 26 14 05:56 pm Link I like 4 and 5 both are good but I prefer the tilt of the head on 5. There is a branch close to her eye on 4 as well that’s a little distracting. Great work. Nov 27 14 05:47 am Link Without a doubt, #4 is the best. 1,2, and 3, the way your mouth is, gives a slight hint of nervousness from the model. 4 is natural, beautiful, well composed. 5 is nice, model placment/composition is slightly off, just doesn't have the "WOW" factor that #4 has. Nov 27 14 09:56 am Link 4 first three with slightly parted lips just don't look good 5th is ok Nov 27 14 11:55 am Link #4 Nov 27 14 01:23 pm Link Thanks to everyone who have replied so far!!!  Yajhil Alvarez wrote: Yay, thankyou Nov 29 14 02:23 pm Link I vote for number 4, myself. Nov 29 14 02:29 pm Link Your mouth looks weird and creepy in all of them. But of the ones posted, I like the last one the most. Nov 29 14 02:39 pm Link Layla_B wrote: It's totally working so keep it up. Good for you Dec 03 14 09:24 pm Link Last is best. Dec 03 14 09:56 pm Link |
