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Photographer

TheZombieJose

Posts: 106

Los Angeles, California, US

two new shots on my port! also would love general feedback for those who have not yet critiqued my port. In return i will comment on my favorite pics from your port!

Nov 29 14 11:48 am Link

Model

C Kalon

Posts: 7

Dallas, Texas, US

Hmm it seems you are stronger in your face shots. Your body images seem to loose something that I can't quite put my finger on it. I would work on keeping that intensity in the eyes in your photos.


Best of Luck!

Dec 01 14 08:14 pm Link

Photographer

TheZombieJose

Posts: 106

Los Angeles, California, US

C Kalon wrote:
Hmm it seems you are stronger in your face shots. Your body images seem to loose something that I can't quite put my finger on it. I would work on keeping that intensity in the eyes in your photos.


Best of Luck!

thanks for the feedback! smile

Dec 03 14 07:18 pm Link

Photographer

Images by MR

Posts: 8908

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

IMO.. her expression kills both shots.

Dec 03 14 07:31 pm Link