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Photogenic Reaction

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Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Dec 04 14 11:03 pm Link

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ChadAlan

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Los Angeles, California, US

Photogenic Reaction wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37072499

Thanks!!!

The model has nice pointed toes and is showing some emotion.

A little too much grain for my taste and no detail in some of the highlights, but that's probably just the b/w conversion.

Looks cool.

EDIT: I don't think it needs the border fx.

Dec 05 14 12:13 am Link

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BkkDan

Posts: 157

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Subject has mysterious looks. Vgood.
Tune the graininess a little down.
Almost full body so if could show her toes would be complete.

Dec 05 14 02:58 am Link

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Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Predominantly an emotional study, of a young girl. Technically lacking, but conveys a distraught feeling.

Dec 05 14 04:56 am Link

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Carl Herbert

Posts: 387

Bellevue, Washington, US

I like it generally. The way the subject shrugs her shoulders up to her ears and tucks her chin behind her knee minimizes her face in the composition. Her hair shades her face too, which also contributes to make her head and face look a bit too small. But I still like it. It has feeling.

Dec 05 14 06:39 am Link

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Photogenic Reaction

Posts: 20

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

CHAD ALAN wrote:
The model has nice pointed toes and is showing some emotion.

A little too much grain for my taste and no detail in some of the highlights, but that's probably just the b/w conversion.

Looks cool.

EDIT: I don't think it needs the border fx.

Dec 05 14 09:53 am Link

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GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

I like it. The grain is a little heavy, a bit distracting on her leg, but overall I like the feel of it.

Dec 05 14 07:48 pm Link

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mophotoart

Posts: 2118

Wichita, Kansas, US

in the film days, you would use 400 ISO film and temperature during develop time to get that grain effect, software does it now, yes...and has that art feel...get rid of the border effect....only critique...

Dec 05 14 08:01 pm Link

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F O R B E S

Posts: 576

New York, New York, US

a little less grain. Image is well composed and shows lots of emotion. Well done.

Dec 05 14 08:01 pm Link

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Images by MR

Posts: 8908

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I like it.

Dec 05 14 08:43 pm Link

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Photogenic Reaction

Posts: 20

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Thanks, everyone!!! Your opinions are highly appreciated!!!

Dec 06 14 11:24 pm Link