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Photographer

Krys Anthony

Posts: 12

BRONX, New York, US

i just got into the portrait photography aspect from my two year road of nightlife photography... so any & ALL criticism is wanted & needed.. I'm not the sensitive type so give it to me straight rather than sugar coating... & please nit pick on the nitty gritty because it'll only give me different view points to look at.. thanks again...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/kp31mn9q0vjgg … 5.jpg?dl=0

Dec 16 14 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Portrait photography emphasizes the face rather than the butt, that pic is more glamour. I'm being a bit cheeky (pun), I know but that's a closer definition for the style of photo.:-)))

Dec 16 14 08:09 pm Link

Photographer

Krys Anthony

Posts: 12

BRONX, New York, US

naw i def know its in the glamour genre.. i just thought anything that is more so staged is portraits.. where as i came from the field where u gotta catch the moments live.. ya know? but what do you think of the image tho? any room for improvements?

Dec 16 14 08:22 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

When somebody says portrait, this is not the image I would think of
The pose of models right arm and mouth is not working for me


Wish you well

Dec 17 14 04:59 am Link

Photographer

Craig March Photography

Posts: 724

New Haven, Connecticut, US

her skin is too mush for me. bring back some of the texture.

Dec 21 14 03:22 pm Link