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Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Hi, Just spent 3 weeks in Florida USA. Some new pics are up...... TOP 12.  Would appreciate comments. More pics coming soon. I need a little help from my good friends on MM smile I will delete the ones that get the least comments smile

Thanks

ELENA

Jan 02 15 08:37 am Link

Photographer

Howard Tarragon

Posts: 673

New York, New York, US

Elena, you are a beautiful woman and there are excellent pictures in your portfolio. The problem is, many are beginning to look the same. Pick out the best of the ones that have different expressions and different poses and drop the rest. You, yourself could work on different expressions and have them appear in future shoots. One knows something's wrong when the eyes start skimming pictures of a beautiful woman.
All the best in the new year.

Jan 02 15 08:47 am Link

Photographer

SKITA Studios

Posts: 1572

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Lose this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37642116

Makes you look heavier than you are which is pretty slim :-)

Love this though the dark gradient on the bottom is a bit too much
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37642101

You have similar facial expressions on a lot of them...the straight ahead look.  I'd trim those a bit if possible...

Jan 02 15 09:11 am Link

Photographer

Eyesso

Posts: 1218

Orlando, Florida, US

I agree....you are stunningly beautiful. 

But your portfolio is a bit type cast.  You are fit, and statuesque, but I think you have a lot more potential than swimwear and lingerie. 

I would want to see you in all sorts of clothes, fitness stuff, yoga stuff, dresses, some high fashion looks, etc.  And I'm not saying dismiss your strengths, but too much "classic sexy" turns cliche, so I would suggest mixing in some artistic versions of that, like this....  http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039288288/   or this   http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039177057/

Jan 02 15 09:22 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37b341dac9_m.jpg
When I look at your photos I feel I am truly looking at a real models portfolio, this photo is no exception on your part.


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379b57dfe6_m.jpg
I would rather see you standing so you can show off your long lovely legs, right hand to head not working for me

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a313d8b6_m.jpg
Not a fan of this image
Crop of models left leg below knee is not working, show the knee include the foot
Being in Florida, I bet you could find a better backdrop then a closet door
[Notice the difference between your right upper leg and left upper leg, shape of models left is so much nicer]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a8f9d045_m.jpg
An ok image but first image of this look is stronger

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379fe6b43f_m.jpg
Pose not as flattering as it could be, because of the way the arms are posed they appear short
Arch your back and lower your shoulders
[Were your hands on your knees your arms would appear longer]

Love your work as always
Happy New Year

Jan 02 15 10:26 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23769

Orlando, Florida, US

Eyesso wrote:
I agree....you are stunningly beautiful. 

But your portfolio is a bit type cast.  You are fit, and statuesque, but I think you have a lot more potential than swimwear and lingerie. 

I would want to see you in all sorts of clothes, fitness stuff, yoga stuff, dresses, some high fashion looks, etc.  And I'm not saying dismiss your strengths, but too much "classic sexy" turns cliche, so I would suggest mixing in some artistic versions of that, like this....  http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039288288/   or this   http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039177057/

Yep, I agree with Mr. E, maybe a bit more variety  .  .  .  the images you've been shooting with Mr. AN (wonderful photographer, BTW), while beautifully done, all have the same feel to them  .  .  .  lots more can be done with your look  .  .  .  pick a few of your favorites from the recent ones, and start adding some new looks and locations  .  .  .  hmmmmmmm, maybe some surf stuff  .  .  .  hint, hint  .  .  .  I'm thinkin' you, a surf board, at Hout Bay, surfin' Dungeons (or, at least lookin' like ya are), would be fantastic  .  .  .  wink

SOS

Jan 02 15 10:39 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Howard Tarragon wrote:
Elena, you are a beautiful woman and there are excellent pictures in your portfolio. The problem is, many are beginning to look the same. Pick out the best of the ones that have different expressions and different poses and drop the rest. You, yourself could work on different expressions and have them appear in future shoots. One knows something's wrong when the eyes start skimming pictures of a beautiful woman.
All the best in the new year.

Thank you so much for your advice. I know that I need to work on my pose and expressions.

ELENA

Jan 02 15 11:17 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

SKITA Studios wrote:
Lose this one:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37642116

Makes you look heavier than you are which is pretty slim :-)

Love this though the dark gradient on the bottom is a bit too much
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37642101

You have similar facial expressions on a lot of them...the straight ahead look.  I'd trim those a bit if possible...

Thanks for that !!! smile  I just needed someone to tell me  that I look a bit heavy in that shot smile Must do something about facial expression !!!!

ELENA

Jan 02 15 11:21 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Eyesso wrote:
I agree....you are stunningly beautiful. 

But your portfolio is a bit type cast.  You are fit, and statuesque, but I think you have a lot more potential than swimwear and lingerie. 

I would want to see you in all sorts of clothes, fitness stuff, yoga stuff, dresses, some high fashion looks, etc.  And I'm not saying dismiss your strengths, but too much "classic sexy" turns cliche, so I would suggest mixing in some artistic versions of that, like this....  http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039288288/   or this   http://www.pinterest.com/pin/295337688039177057/[/qu

Thanks for your input. I am doing a shoot in Cape Town when I get back ...different looks with STYLIST and MUA for my new port.

ELENA

Jan 02 15 11:25 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Lee_Photography wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37b341dac9_m.jpg
When I look at your photos I feel I am truly looking at a real models portfolio, this photo is no exception on your part.


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379b57dfe6_m.jpg
I would rather see you standing so you can show off your long lovely legs, right hand to head not working for me

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a313d8b6_m.jpg
Not a fan of this image
Crop of models left leg below knee is not working, show the knee include the foot
Being in Florida, I bet you could find a better backdrop then a closet door
[Notice the difference between your right upper leg and left upper leg, shape of models left is so much nicer]

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a8f9d045_m.jpg
An ok image but first image of this look is stronger

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379fe6b43f_m.jpg
Pose not as flattering as it could be, because of the way the arms are posed they appear short
Arch your back and lower your shoulders
[Were your hands on your knees your arms would appear longer]

Love your work as always
Happy New Year

Thank you so much for your advice smile Always appreciated  <3

ELENA

Jan 02 15 11:29 am Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Your pictures are fine, but your concepts are lacking. Get outside the box.

Jan 02 15 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

Rob Photosby

Posts: 4810

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Your photos are delightful, but the later ones do not appear to be adding much that is not already in your portfolio.

Jan 02 15 03:43 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Lallure Photographic wrote:
Your pictures are fine, but your concepts are lacking. Get outside the box.

Outside the box ??? smile  Thanks for advice..

Jan 02 15 05:13 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Rob Photosby wrote:
Your photos are delightful, but the later ones do not appear to be adding much that is not already in your portfolio.

Thanks for your advice smile

Jan 02 15 05:14 pm Link

Photographer

alessandro2009

Posts: 8091

Florence, Toscana, Italy

I think you could drop the follow images:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379fe6b43f_m.jpg
for the pose
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a8f9d045_m.jpg
since you have already another better that this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a313d8b6_m.jpg
for the crop and the legs look less slender
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141218/23/5493d0556a562_m.jpg
for the crop on your left hand and how appear your left legs partially over the slip

Jan 03 15 12:46 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

alessandro2009 wrote:
I think you could drop the follow images:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a379fe6b43f_m.jpg
for the pose
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a8f9d045_m.jpg
since you have already another better that this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141230/20/54a37a313d8b6_m.jpg
for the crop and the legs look less slender
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/141218/23/5493d0556a562_m.jpg
for the crop on your left hand and how appear your left legs partially over the slip

I agree with you Alessandro...Grazie smile

ELENA

Jan 03 15 05:55 am Link