Tell me! And what kind of images do I miss in my porfolio? Jan 14 15 03:44 am Link Jan 14 15 04:20 am Link Over all pose of model is a bit stagnate, head body facing same direction, arms just hanging at sides, models right eye looks a bit like deer in head lights, distracting tee-shirt Photo has much space above your head, but yet you are missing a foot and toes, wrinkled sheet not adding to quality of image Models right upper leg seems to be in odd lighting For me this has excessive head tilt and the missing hand This is just one photographers opinion, so base your decision to remove or keep an image on what you think! Over all you are an excellent model, when seeing your portfolio this is what I would expect to see and what a model should look like Jan 14 15 06:16 am Link I think we can agree that you have a good look. I don't, however see any evidence of you ability to be a pro, which means I don't see anything remotely advertising related. Remember, that modeling is the use of the human figure, to sell a product, idea, or concept. It is a selling function, for commercial purposes, or editorial purposes, for the most part. That should be a part, of any good model portfolio, no matter what genre is involved. What you have, is pictures of an attractive girl. Jan 14 15 08:33 am Link You have a very pretty face, and great body, though I feel like certain images make your face appear rounder than it needs to be. I like 2,4,5,6. All other images, though nice, are disposable to me. Good luck! Jan 14 15 09:22 pm Link Jan 22 15 04:41 am Link Anita1993 wrote: Top row last 3 Jan 27 15 04:19 pm Link Anita1993 wrote: The Only one i could think of as your portfolio really is diverse is with your hair in a Bun with your head/eyes shifted slightly away from the camera to more show the definition of your facial features Jan 28 15 09:23 am Link Jan 28 15 09:44 am Link Lallure Photographic wrote: wow.. I find that a Little too harsh for you to comment in such a way as to her "ability" to model as a "Pro" Given the opportunity and time in front of the right photographer with the right connections and the right knowledge of how to capture said Model in the correct light for the ad campaign or marketing promotion needed.. so would be deemed fit. Jan 28 15 09:45 am Link Jan 28 15 10:49 am Link Jan 28 15 10:52 am Link You are lovely. If you need to make room for new images, I would remove these, in this order, for the reasons given. 1. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37702086 . Pure drivers licence lighting. Or booking photo down at the county jail. 2. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37354769 . Technically: Low contrast, legs cut off. Aesthetically: upside down images of people lying down really don't resonate with most viewers. It is lazy photography on the part of the photographer. 3. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37285303 . It's a really nice image and would look great in a photographer's portfolio, but you are such a small element in the overall image that it doesn't do much for you. 4. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/37702086 . Technically: Low contrast and flat. Aesthetically: Head in an awkward position; facial expression ... blah. Beyond that, if you wanted to lose more, you'd have to pick them yourself based on something you personally weren't too happy with. In my opinion, the rest are quite good. All the best. WCR3 Jan 28 15 07:37 pm Link In my opinion, the first 2 pics in your current port do not do anything for you...you are beautiful, so many looks, I think you can be more selective...you have the looks...Mo Jan 28 15 07:47 pm Link |