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Digital Artist

AbbeyMarie

Posts: 71

San Antonio, Texas, US

All feedback, good or bad, is appreciated!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38093597

Mar 03 15 04:23 pm Link

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SV FOTO

Posts: 28

Tucson, Arizona, US

AbbeyMarie wrote:
All feedback, good or bad, is appreciated!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38093597

I love the idea. Have you considered removing the leg installation?
Maybe the eye, hip and chest is less spookier.
The leg situation looks more like a disease and freaked me out a bit. I would remove it and see what vibes it gives to others.
Just an idea...

Mar 03 15 05:53 pm Link

Photographer

Rob Photosby

Posts: 4810

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Very skilfully done, but ugly.

Mar 04 15 05:52 am Link

Photographer

Evan Hiltunen

Posts: 4162

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Not everyone reads the title, or caption, so they may not get the intent of the image (even though the intent is pretty clear).

Love the toning, overall look, and execution with the exceptions of the flowers above the left breast and the left eye.

Those two elements just don't have the right feel. Maybe the sizing is wrong, or the shadowing ...

They just look more like attached elements than an actual part of her body. Whereas the other ones look more integrated.

Mar 04 15 06:01 am Link

Photographer

Selene Photographica

Posts: 4986

Baltimore, Maryland, US

I really like it - it keeps me looking closer and hold my attention to discover each piece.  I think it is very artistic.

Mar 04 15 05:56 pm Link

Photographer

afterdarktherapy

Posts: 53

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Can you explain the message behind this image? I m not getting it...

Mar 07 15 06:21 pm Link

Photographer

Jason Fassnacht

Posts: 437

Sacramento, California, US

It feels like your biting Sergio's work hella hard ...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130717/13/51e6fc294438b_m.jpg

Only creepy style ...

J.

Mar 07 15 06:50 pm Link

Artist/Painter

themainloop

Posts: 12

Santa Rosa, California, US

Lol I hope not...

Mar 07 15 07:06 pm Link