Vinny Kim wrote:
You have a stunning port with a wide range of styles represented. You've kept your port small and diverse, which is important. You work with great photographers!
I really have nothing critical to say about it , except that you could possibly work a bit on facial expression. It seems to be about the same in all the pictures.
But again, I love your work and would love to work with you someday.

Critique mine please!

Thanks!

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https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … bdbf_m.jpg
This photo to me, seems like the model is out of focus and the middle couch cushion is in focus? is that intentional.. or is my eyesight really getting that bad?

I really enjoyed your portfolio. I love black and white photos and artistic nudes. The composition of your photos is interesting as well. and the lighting is nice. I left a comment on my favorite.

but other than that one photo i dont have anything negative to say about yours either! Perhaps you could add some images that focus more on the background than the model to add some diversity to your portfolio.

Lorayne York wrote:

Thanks!

All links are 18+


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … bdbf_m.jpg
This photo to me, seems like the model is out of focus and the middle couch cushion is in focus? is that intentional.. or is my eyesight really getting that bad?

I really enjoyed your portfolio. I love black and white photos and artistic nudes. The composition of your photos is interesting as well. and the lighting is nice. I left a comment on my favorite.

but other than that one photo i dont have anything negative to say about yours either! Perhaps you could add some images that focus more on the background than the model to add some diversity to your portfolio.

It is definitely intentional. As it is with most of my work, the idea was to tell a story with that picture....."When you're gone...." is the title of that one. Hopefully that helps to explain the focus issue.

Thanks for your feedback and critique!

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
As far as what you got on the profile now it both varied and interesting. You can use some newer shots as if you don't have anything up there more recent than 6 months, people might start to wonder. I think you can solve the recent shot thing by getting new shoots...maybe a roadtrip....maybe NYC. Just suggestions. 

EDIT: My bad, I see some recent shots.

i think i have 3 shots that are within 6 months? 2 being within the week. you know i love looking at your portfolio and i dont have much to critique, except i like the male additions you have they are NIOCE.