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Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

What do you think about my portfolio?

Jul 10 15 08:49 am Link

Photographer

Oubliette Media

Posts: 146

RESEDA, California, US

You have a nice port. My only comment is that the third and fourth photos are too dark.

Jul 10 15 09:10 am Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3717

Walnut Creek, California, US

It is good, but I would like to see more variety.

But just one worthless opinion.

smile

Jul 10 15 10:50 am Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Anderson wrote:
You have a nice port. My only comment is that the third and fourth photos are too dark.

Thanks!

Jul 10 15 11:43 am Link

Photographer

Rob Photosby

Posts: 4810

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Your portfolio is at a very high standard, both in terms of what showing what you look like and how you pose and also the less important criterion of the standard of the photos themselves.

That being said I would definitely ditch #4 (Jenny Boot, implied).  The treatment around your eyes is most unflattering.

If I was looking at your portfolio with a view to working with you, I would be disappointed to find only one full length photo and no bikini photo.  The latter is particularly important to show the presence or absence of tattoos, especially as so many models with tattoos also have "none" in their stats (I am not suggesting that you have been careless here, just that seeing is so much more reliable than the contents of a checkbox).

Jul 10 15 03:02 pm Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
It is good, but I would like to see more variety.

But just one worthless opinion.

smile

Thanks!

Jul 12 15 01:30 pm Link

Photographer

Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Lovely look and work. Nothing else to say. smile

Jul 12 15 03:13 pm Link

Photographer

Kris Krieg

Posts: 1341

Missoula, Montana, US

Anita,

Your book looks very good. You are very pretty and have an agency figure. You have some very diverse looks and moods, which is in your favor. You may want to work on more variation of facial expressions. There are quite a few that seem to have the same expression. Here are some specific thoughts:

I like the composition and tonality of this shot, but I feel your skin has been smoothed out a little too much. Probably not enough to take it out of your book, but your skin does look a little synthetic.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150710/08/559fe878ecf66_m.jpg

Nothing particularly wrong with this shot, but it is a little dark and uninspired.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150712/13/55a2cb16c610b_m.jpg

Damn girl! Those are some killer legs! Wow. Definitely a keeper. I would like to see more lighting on you, but compositionally and artistically, it is working great.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150421/03/553624844bbac_m.jpg

Great smile here, but I'm going to nit pick your teeth. Maybe your teeth need to be brightened a bit, seems to be a lot of surface information. If I was the photographer, I would have adjusted your teeth shape a bit. However, great tonality and love the detail of your hair in this shot.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150511/13/55510d53db064_m.jpg

This is my personal favorite. Love the texture and detail in your back. Those back dimples make me melt…just gorgeous.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150110/13/54b19ecbb116a_m.jpg

Strong book overall though. Great look, keep rockin' it!  -Kris

Jul 12 15 08:47 pm Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Lovely look and work. Nothing else to say. smile

Thank you! smile

Jul 13 15 04:33 am Link

Model

Anita1993

Posts: 316

Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands

Kris Krieg wrote:
Anita,

Your book looks very good. You are very pretty and have an agency figure. You have some very diverse looks and moods, which is in your favor. You may want to work on more variation of facial expressions. There are quite a few that seem to have the same expression. Here are some specific thoughts:

I like the composition and tonality of this shot, but I feel your skin has been smoothed out a little too much. Probably not enough to take it out of your book, but your skin does look a little synthetic.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150710/08/559fe878ecf66_m.jpg

Nothing particularly wrong with this shot, but it is a little dark and uninspired.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150712/13/55a2cb16c610b_m.jpg

Damn girl! Those are some killer legs! Wow. Definitely a keeper. I would like to see more lighting on you, but compositionally and artistically, it is working great.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150421/03/553624844bbac_m.jpg

Great smile here, but I'm going to nit pick your teeth. Maybe your teeth need to be brightened a bit, seems to be a lot of surface information. If I was the photographer, I would have adjusted your teeth shape a bit. However, great tonality and love the detail of your hair in this shot.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150511/13/55510d53db064_m.jpg

This is my personal favorite. Love the texture and detail in your back. Those back dimples make me melt…just gorgeous.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/150110/13/54b19ecbb116a_m.jpg

Strong book overall though. Great look, keep rockin' it!  -Kris

Thanks! smile

Jul 14 15 08:16 am Link