Just finished my first couples shoot! Please visit my page and take a look! Comments and Constructive critiques?? Sep 02 15 02:19 am Link When you use a wide angle lens you get perspective distortion, note how small her feet look compared to models hands Pose, models arms are just limp at her sides, placing hips on angle to camera has a slimming effect Because of your high camera angle you have lost appearance of models neck Perspective distortion in this image again, note how large his foot looks [Notice how much longer her neck looks in this image, because the camera is not shooting down on her] [When using a wide angle lens, objects closer to lens will look much larger then those farther away.] I would suggest cropping image above your logo, this will remove males partial hand, also burn in her hand to darken it, and lighten his teeth a tiny bit Could use a bit of contrast to add some punch From a capture the moment this is your best image [Solid colors work better than busy tops, note the difference as seen in this photo, our eyes are not distracted by his shirt, but are drawn to her top] No return comments required or desired I wish you well Sep 02 15 04:00 am Link |