Hi, I've recently joined this site as I would like to expand my portfolio beyond just focusing on weddings. I would appreciate any feedback on the images in my portfolio.
Many thanks in advance

Because of the side lighting you are highlighting models skin imperfections
Why show the white part of her eyes to the camera?
Light appears too high, note nose shadow touching upper lip


With that much arm would be nice to see her hands too
Due to pose model has lost appearance of neck, try not to support weight on models shoulders

I wish you well

For these two, they remind me Peter Hurley's headshot work.

I would have liked to have seen the model look into the camera.  Also another thing to try
is turning the shoulders and even leaning towards to camera (a little).  The with the
shoulders turned you'll get a diagonal line connecting the two should instead of
a straight line, makes for an different look.



If they lean a little towards the camera, it helps to create and engaging look combined with the eyes looking at camera.



If you want to avoid the white's in the eyes, have the model look at where his/her
nose is pointing and it doesn't matter which angle you're shooting from.

Lot's of photographers here to be inspired by and online resources very good these days as well.

Welcome to MM ! Keep up the good work !

You have 3 images with arms but hands missing.  Were they amputated?  Suggest getting rid of these.

But just one worthless opinion.

Thanks for the great feedback. I'll try and take these into account the next time I shoot