Hey all. I would like someone to try their hand at "adjusting" this image, maybe lightening up, some beauty retouch, etc to make the image look as good as possible. 

This is the link to a finished retouch, that I feel the left side of his face is still too light. Hoping someone can rework this.
https://www.dropbox.com/home/Seth's%20F … view=1.jpg

Please leave your email and I can send you the RAW version of this image to take a look at.

This image was taken by me, and my copyright..

Thanks for looking.

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