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Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Hi everyone,
Here are some new pics.  Let me know what you think and if you think something's port worthy in your opinion.  Thanks!

NUMBER 1
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_8520-Edit%20Internet_zps4ramagxt.png

NUMBER 2
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_8561-Edit%20Internet_zpsrsna35q3.png

NUMBER 3
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_8708-Edit%20Internet_zpsd9smiqug.png

NUMBER 4
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_8669-Edit%20Internet_zpsyftzguoe.png

NUMBER 5 (NEW - FINAL ADD)
https://i1278.photobucket.com/albums/y508/YajhilAlvarez/IMG_8634-Edit%20Internet_zpssn4wieyx.png

Nov 26 15 12:21 am Link

Photographer

Julietsdream

Posts: 868

Burbank, California, US

....Hi Yajhil....
I like #'s 2 & 3 the best...
and #3 is port worthy, IMO...

***Happy Thanksgiving***

Nov 26 15 07:49 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Julietsdream wrote:
....Hi Yajhil....
I like #'s 2 & 3 the best...
and #3 is port worthy, IMO...

***Happy Thanksgiving***

Thanks!  You too :-)

Nov 26 15 12:56 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

I like 1, 2, 3 with 3 my favorite.

Photo 1:
This for me is his best looking hair [under control]
Shirt looks grainy in the green field areas
Camera angle seems a bit high

Photo 2:
His nose looks the smallest in this image
Shirt looks pulled at top button [Vertical lines bend in at top button]

Photo 3:
Hair has a nice highlight at front, looks shiny and alive
Tee-shirt neck area looks turned under in front
Catch light in eyes gives them life
The hint of a smile makes him seem more friendly

Photo 4:
Eyes look like the top half is cut off


I wish you well

Nov 27 15 04:24 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Lee_Photography wrote:
I like 1, 2, 3 with 3 my favorite.

Photo 1:
This for me is his best looking hair [under control]
Shirt looks grainy in the green field areas
Camera angle seems a bit high

Photo 2:
His nose looks the smallest in this image
Shirt looks pulled at top button [Vertical lines bend in at top button]

Photo 3:
Hair has a nice highlight at front, looks shiny and alive
Tee-shirt neck area looks turned under in front
Catch light in eyes gives them life
The hint of a smile makes him seem more friendly

Photo 4:
Eyes look like the top half is cut off


I wish you well

Thanks!

Nov 27 15 09:06 pm Link

Model

Zandra G

Posts: 50

Göteborg, Västra Götaland, Sweden

I like the colors and model's expression most in 2 and 3. I'd put 3 in my portfolio.

Nov 27 15 10:52 pm Link

Photographer

cheshiredave

Posts: 394

Oakland, California, US

I like #2 and #3 as well, though I feel each could benefit from a tighter crop. I really like the style of #4, but he looks overly retouched, and his right hand placement is a little forced. I wonder if there's another from that series that might work better.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Nov 28 15 10:05 am Link

Photographer

L O C U T U S

Posts: 1746

Bangor, Maine, US

#3 smile

Nov 28 15 11:27 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

Thanks everyone :-)

Nov 29 15 10:28 am Link

Model

CamelliaFlower

Posts: 385

New York, New York, US

Definitely #3--the subtle hint of emotion makes the image more interesting.

Nov 29 15 11:02 am Link

Photographer

ImOutOfHere

Posts: 2227

New York, New York, US

CamelliaFlower wrote:
Definitely #3--the subtle hint of emotion makes the image more interesting.

Thanks!

Dec 01 15 01:32 pm Link