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Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Post an image and i'll write a senryu.

Haven't done this in a few years, so you'll forgive me if I'm a bit rusty.

Be patient it might take a day or so to reply.

Aug 23 16 07:06 pm Link

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Light Writer wrote:
Post an image and i'll write a senryu.

Haven't done this in a few years, so you'll forgive me if I'm a bit rusty.

Be patient it might take a day or so to reply.

Hey Light Writer, long time!


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Aug 23 16 07:22 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Jorge Kreimer wrote:

Hey Light Writer, long time!


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41012587 18+

hope of the young when
future's far away- leap and
gravity's defied

Aug 24 16 07:57 am Link

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

Light Writer wrote:

hope of the young when
future's far away- leap and
gravity's defied

Very nice!

Aug 24 16 11:27 am Link

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Luna Diosa

Posts: 13242

Elizabeth, New Jersey, US

Aug 24 16 01:19 pm Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
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cluttered modern life
crowds out the past- forgotten
ancestors present

Aug 27 16 08:49 am Link

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FallenEcho

Posts: 1203

Escondido, California, US

Aug 27 16 02:48 pm Link

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Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

FallenEcho wrote:
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heavens cry return
those stolen ancient symbols-
paten and chalice

Aug 28 16 08:08 am Link

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FallenEcho

Posts: 1203

Escondido, California, US

Light Writer wrote:

heavens cry return
those stolen ancient symbols-
paten and chalice

Interesting I like it thank you. smile

Aug 28 16 04:06 pm Link