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Photographer

Vandergraph

Posts: 2

London, England, United Kingdom

Relatively new to photographing models (mostly friends). A few new images up. Your opinions/suggestions are welcome.
How can I be better?

Apr 06 17 03:08 am Link

Photographer

sweet gamine

Posts: 475

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Please provide some insight as to how this image found a home in your portfolio:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34582793
Red knees, claw for a hand, out of focus and cropped out feet dominating the image, head thrown completely back like her neck is broken and a face that appears to be caved in (except for the nose).

Unflattering, out of focus snapshot that can only be there for the purpose of displaying a bare bottom:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38518843 18+ (possibly)

I like this. There is a story being told. The model is posed well and the light is good. Do more of this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41688772 18+

Sweet model, good light, nice composition (even with the missing hands):
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42047642

Apr 13 17 11:05 pm Link

Photographer

Vandergraph

Posts: 2

London, England, United Kingdom

Ace - thanks for the response.

Comments duly noted

Apr 18 17 02:03 am Link