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VQICOM STUDIOS

Posts: 6

Los Angeles, California, US

trying to find the way out of editorial and more standard based...  could use some critics

Jul 17 17 04:47 pm Link

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Jorge Kreimer

Posts: 3716

San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico

VQICOM STUDIOS wrote:
trying to find the way out of editorial and more standard based...  could use some critics

What do you mean by "the way out of editorial" and "standard based"?

Jul 18 17 07:07 pm Link

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Carlos Occidental

Posts: 10583

Los Angeles, California, US

Could you show us your editorial tears (tearsheets)? That'd help.

Sep 27 17 01:19 pm Link

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Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

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Some observations
Why do you have what appears to be double exposure, especially around hands and arms?
With all that leg would be nice to see her foot too.

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Are you using on camera flash?

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For me I would like to see more light in her eyes

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Eyes do not seem as sharp as they could be

You have some great concepts, so you should be able to do what ever you want

I wish you well

Sep 27 17 02:16 pm Link