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Retoucher

Bagus Radhityo

Posts: 42

Jakarta, Jakarta, Indonesia

Hi all,
I need criticism for my retouching results

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170718/13/596e71221e773.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170718/13/596e7106749f6.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170718/13/596e71140fcc7.jpg

Thank you


All Photo Credit by Weronikamamot

Jul 18 17 01:37 pm Link

Retoucher

SistagurL

Posts: 250

Greenville, South Carolina, US

This retouch doesn't seem complete in some areas and overly retouched in others. For example, you did nothing to her hair and the flower. It seems as though you may have lightened the shadows too much which are causing gray areas on her skin. Try not to over do it when you dodge and burn which we can do very easily. I can't see the picture as clear as I want to since I am not on my computer but I hope what I could spot will help you improve alittle.

Jul 28 17 10:52 am Link

Retoucher

danish18

Posts: 382

Delhi, Delhi, India

I think you did a great job with the skin texture however you didn't paid much attention to her stray hair an lips. There is some correction needed in those areas. i particularly think that the contrast is little high in some areas as on her cheeks.

Sep 20 17 09:59 pm Link