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Photons 2 Pixels Images

Posts: 17011

Berwick, Pennsylvania, US

That means you pick from the menu for your critique...

If you are asking me to choose a photo, I will choose from your portfolio. Otherwise, you can link to any photo that you were involved in creating elsewhere. You can pick up to one MAIN COURSE and 2 SIDES. Example 2BD or 4AC. Or only a MAIN COURSE or only up to 2 SIDES. All I ask in return is you pick my best and worst with a brief explanation as to why you think they are best and worst. Be patient. I don't come on MM much anymore but I will get to you as soon as I can.

****************MENU****************
MAIN COURSE
1. What I like about the image in general.
2. What I don't like about the image in general.
3. Both what I like and don't like about the image in general.
4. More detailed critique on the image focusing more on the positives. (What I think you did right)
5. More detailed critique on the image focusing more on the negatives. (What I think you can improve upon)
6. A more detailed critique on the image listing both positives and negatives.

SIDES
A. Pick your avatar.
B. Pick an image for you to remove.
C. Pick your best and worst.
D. What genre, style, or theme would I shoot with you?
E. Pay, TF*, Charge.

Apr 20 18 04:43 pm Link

Model

MatureModelMM

Posts: 2843

Detroit, Michigan, US

OK,  I'd love to play smile

I think this one is your best by far, she has an amazing figure, the pose is great, the lighting and photography are excellent. The logo is quite distracting though. 
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/180420/15/5ada6d8d5ee53_m.jpg


I think this is your worst, it simply doesn't do anything for me at all and it's not clear what the color effect is supposed to represent. Again the logo is a major distraction.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/180117/02/5a5f26fb91419_m.jpg


For my photos, could you do 6AC using one of my favorite recent nudes, https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42413264?

Apr 25 18 05:51 am Link